Wookieepedia:AC/Attack on Imperial interrogator droids

Attack on Imperial interrogator droids

Things to do

• Reference 2. All of the "unknown" phrasing is particularly poor wording for a reference note.
• "...the animated television series Star Wars Rebels begins five years before the Battle of Yavin" is not self-sourcing and requires a reference. Additionally, formal writing should never use first- or second-person, such as I, you, or we. "We" aren't doing anything. The article is.
• The publication date in the BTS can't be sourced to the book either
  • All done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 12:35, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
• The infobox needs to state that the event is set before 5 BBY, then, with appropriate sourcing. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:42, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
  • And in the body, as well. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:44, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
• "As the attack on Imperial interrogator droids occurs before the events of the show," — source? Imperators II^(Talk) 12:42, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
  • Please take a look at the current date reference. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:09, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
• |prev= and |next= fields of the infobox need to implemented, if the information in the conflict navbox is reliable. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:42, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
  • I would say it is reliable, added now. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:09, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
    • Those references need to be manual reference notes, however, since this attack is not mentioned in either of them. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:12, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
      • This is my first time for this kind of a reference note, so it probably doesn't satisfy your objection. But I guess I'll take my chance :P Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:53, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
        • Ref 1 is fine, I guess. Regarding ref 2, though: you call "The Machine in the Ghost" a prelude short, which I take to mean that it takes place before the events of Rebels. What places the Sabine sketchbook before the short, though? Imperators II^(Talk) 14:11, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
          • Yeah, you are probably right. I couldn't find anything that places the events of these shorts. Changed the event to the mission in Capital City. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:23, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
• Conflict is infobox-exclusive. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:42, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
  • Added to the article body. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:09, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
• The paragraph in "The attack" needs to be split up. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:32, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
• In that paragraph, there are two consecutive sentences beginning with "The attack was [...]". That should be revised. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:32, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:42, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Removal of GA status

• Placed on probation at Meeting 108. MasterFred^(Whatever) 20:32, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
• Status kept per Meeting 109. MasterFred^(Whatever) 22:07, October 30, 2018 (UTC)

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