Talk: JediCommando

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Hey, welcome! Not to discourage you, but Darth Culator is working on that article individually. Still, we'd like to have you join the project if you want to still. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:35, 12 November 2008 (UTC)

501st and stuff

Yes, I removed the list of battles, as well as the list of members, because FAs aren't suppose to have lists. As for your Luke Skywalker thing, well, if you feel like adding that info to his article, go for it. As for what he did in Vector Prime, well, it's too much to explain here, but bascially he discovered the Yuuzhan Vong on Belkadan, and fought Yomin Carr. Perhaps you could just add info from the books you remember to his article. Chack Jadson (Talk) 13:08, 14 February 2009 (UTC)

Luke

Hey, that's fine. I've been a bit busy with school too lately. If you could use the Wormhead sandbox page (the name escapes me right now), that'd be great. Thanks. Chack Jadson (Talk) 16:36, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

  • Eh, you probably should just post a message on his talk page, just to let him know what's going on. He does have to approve you before you can just edit his project page though. Just let him know you're interested in adding NJO info, and see if he approves or not. Chack Jadson (Talk) 15:59, 22 March 2009 (UTC)

The Warmaster

Hi JediCommando,

Tht's right, I did take on the writing of Tsavong Lah in preparation for his nomination for FA status. As I wrote on my userpage, this is the stuff left to do for Tsavong:

"I will also finish Tsavong Lah once I can bring myself to read through Traitor and the Enemy Lines Duology and try to hash together a timeline for that part of his life. He also needs a P&T. Gugh." — basically, I need to add info from Traitor and the Enemy Lines Duology, plus a little bit from Dark Journey I missed and some shit from Karen Traviss' Boba Fett ebook that doesn't make any sense. I also have to write a personality and traits section.

Now, I don't own Tsavong Lah, but I have written 80% of the article. At the moment, that's 20% that people could be being informed about, and 20% that I won't be able to write until July. So yeah, if someone wanted to fill in that missing information, I'd be happy for them to do that. I would ask to write the P&T myself, though, as I already started doing that and have a plan for it, but you can add info from Enemy Lines and Traitor if you like.

I'd suggest reading sections of the article for which you have the novel handy — maybe the Balance Point sections or the Star by Star sections. That might give you an idea of how I like to detail my articles and the prose that I use etc. Looking at your NJO contributions on Wormhead Reloaded, I'd say that that level of detail is very much on the skinny side (then again it is for Luke, who's just too massive to overdetail); on the other hand, I'll be happy to lend a hand as long as you're alright with your additions being scrutinised!

Happy editing,

-- —Harrar (Cut the comm chatter) 21:35, 5 June 2009 (UTC) Hey Harrar, sorry I haven't been working on the Tsavong article lately, but I've been real busy. Anyways, I took a look at the article, and I was wondering what specifically needs to be done. I noticed that there are a few POV issues, and it sounds kind of prosey here and there, and you did say you wanted to write the P&T section, so I just want to know what I can do. Thanks!

  • Hi again JC, no worries about Tsavong. Well I'm back from uni now, so I'll probably get going with it and finish him in a few days or something, I'm having a Wookieepedia intensive week before my summer gets busy and he only needs a bit more to push him to the right point. I hope that's okay; if you want to help, however, you can point out where you think there's too much POV and proseyness and I'll see about trimming it down :) -- —Harrar (Cut the comm chatter) 00:39, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

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Hey, that's fine. I understand if you've been busy. Hope all's well. 98.233.175.153 18:39, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

  • This is Chack, the site won't let me stay logged in for some reason. 98.233.175.153 18:40, September 17, 2009 (UTC)