Fall of Korriban
Heads up
There's a new TOR webcomic coming out, entitled Blood of the Empire. Here's the link.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:47, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
Tingel Arm campaign
Peppi Bow
You have previously told me I was free to add audio to quotes on any articles you are actively working in. I've added one to one of the BSV quotes to Peppi Bow's article. But I also wanted to let you know I took a little more liberty and changed the main quote at the top of her page as well. The main quote I think should introduce the reader to what the article is about and the quote that was there didn't seem to do that. I hope you don't mind. Take a look at what I put in there and feel free to revert it if you don't approve. I won't be offended. ;) - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 18:13, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
- Oh I approve, I think the quote works just as well, if not better than the original. In regards to the image size: I switched them back to their larger versions. I tend to give images that are so naturally wide a larger thumbnail, as the slimmer thumb reduces the height a lot, and it just bothers me for one reason or another. I personally haven't heard anything in regards to a 250 pixel thumb maximum policy, and so for now I'll keep them as is until a serious problem arises with them. As far as I'm concerned, images are made to be seen, and big ones don't reduce an article's quality unless they get ridiculous. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 23:20, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
- I complete agree about images. If you can't see them, what's the point. I honestly don't even remember who it was that instructed me that way, as it was 3½ to 4 years ago when I was still a noob. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 23:26, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
Re: Nala Se
Hey Trayus. I believe that Darth Revanon owns Gambit: Stealth, as he's been updating appearances as well; you might want to ask him. I'm probably going to buy the book (unfortunately out of obligation to TCW, and that's not much of a reason) when I get back, so if you don't get the info by then, I'll make sure to get it to you. And thanks for your good wishes; the flight is going to be exhausting, but going to D.C. should be fun, as that's where I'm going. :) CC7567 (talk) 05:57, March 18, 2010 (UTC)
Nuur
Congrats on successfully passing Shaela for the FAs! This was your first KotOR nom, right? Anyway, just wanna say when you do work on Qel-Droma and Saresh, let me know and I'll help you with what I can.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 12:37, March 18, 2010 (UTC)
Clone Wars Gambit: Stealth
- Hey Dark Lord Trayus, I do own Clone Wars Gambit: Stealth but I haven't had a chance to read it yet, so I don't even know if she makes an appearance or what role she plays in the novel. Sorry.--Darth Revanon 18:46, March 18, 2010 (UTC)
- Your'e very welcome and I will :)--Darth Revanon 22:37, March 18, 2010 (UTC)
Stealth
Hey, are you still looking for someone who has Clone Wars Gambit: Stealth? Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:54, March 18, 2010 (UTC)
- I have it, and IIRC, Nala Se has a pretty small role in it. I can add info from it if you'd like, or tell you what she does and you can add it yourself, whatever you prefer. Chack Jadson (Talk) 20:22, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
- I'll look through the book tomorrow and see exactly what she does, and then give you the information or just add it myself. Chack Jadson (Talk) 00:23, March 20, 2010 (UTC)
- Hey, I'm sorry I haven't gotten you the Nala Se info yet; I've been busy in RL. I'll get it to you on the 26th. Once again, my apologies. Chack Jadson (Talk) 00:17, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Well, there's a Kaminoan by the name of Nala Shan in the Kaliida Shoals MedCenter. No information is given on her; she has an extremely minor role. Do you think it's reasonable to assume that it's meant to be Nala Se? (I'm asking you because it's your article.) If you figure it is meant to be her, I'll add the background appearance she makes into the article. If you can find any source (SW.com or whatever) stating that she is supposed to be Se, that'd be great. Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:53, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
- Yeah, that's what I figured. Anyway, in the book, Ahsoka gets injured in the Second Battle of Kothlis, and is sent to Kaliida Shoals. She doesn't like it, because she feels that Se (or Shan :P ) is very smart, but is emotionally detached, and doesn't feel a connection with the clones. Se also prevents her from contacting anyone outside the station, much to Ahsoka's dismay. Later, the Padawan gets kicked out and sent back to the Temple because she's recovered somewhat, and is too restless. That's all I found. I'll be going through the book in the upcoming days to fix some redlinks (our article on Gambit: Stealth) is in dreadful shape, and if I missed anything, I'll let you know. But basically, she's only mentioned as being a Kaliida Shoals administrator, although you can get a BTS note for the name (mis)spelling. I'm not sure when this takes place. I'd suggest talking to CC about where this fits in the timeline; if anyone would know, it's him. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:23, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
- It doesn't say that it's the first meeting. Although it could be, we can't be sure. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:44, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
- Btw, Durd gets captured in Defenders of Peace (as you probably know but has escaped sometime before this novel. The book talks about how he was captured and then escaped, so it takes place sometime after that episode. Chack Jadson (Talk) 18:58, March 28, 2010 (UTC)
- It doesn't say that it's the first meeting. Although it could be, we can't be sure. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:44, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
- Yeah, that's what I figured. Anyway, in the book, Ahsoka gets injured in the Second Battle of Kothlis, and is sent to Kaliida Shoals. She doesn't like it, because she feels that Se (or Shan :P ) is very smart, but is emotionally detached, and doesn't feel a connection with the clones. Se also prevents her from contacting anyone outside the station, much to Ahsoka's dismay. Later, the Padawan gets kicked out and sent back to the Temple because she's recovered somewhat, and is too restless. That's all I found. I'll be going through the book in the upcoming days to fix some redlinks (our article on Gambit: Stealth) is in dreadful shape, and if I missed anything, I'll let you know. But basically, she's only mentioned as being a Kaliida Shoals administrator, although you can get a BTS note for the name (mis)spelling. I'm not sure when this takes place. I'd suggest talking to CC about where this fits in the timeline; if anyone would know, it's him. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:23, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
- Well, there's a Kaminoan by the name of Nala Shan in the Kaliida Shoals MedCenter. No information is given on her; she has an extremely minor role. Do you think it's reasonable to assume that it's meant to be Nala Se? (I'm asking you because it's your article.) If you figure it is meant to be her, I'll add the background appearance she makes into the article. If you can find any source (SW.com or whatever) stating that she is supposed to be Se, that'd be great. Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:53, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
Nala Se in Stealth
She has only a minor role in the book as overseer of the Kaliida Shoals Med Center. She is actually called Nala Shan in the book, but I'm assuming it's as typo, since I doubt there is another Kaminoan with the first name Nala that is at Kaliida Shoals... —Unsigned comment by Deriddertiger1981 (talk • contribs)
Review?
Hey Trayus, could you please do a pre-nom review of Koffi Arana for me?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:53, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
- OK, thanks. I haven't figured how to get back on IRC, so yes, please post whatever objections you have on my talk page.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 12:20, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Decided to nom the article, I would still appreciate a review, if you have any free time.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:08, April 17, 2010 (UTC)
RE: Tera
Hey Trayus,
Not at all. You and your judgement are well trusted, and I thank you for catching what I may have missed. Feel free to take up that role whenever the need arises.—Tommy 9281 03:19, March 25, 2010 (UTC)
Hylo Visz
right|thumb|100px Just wanted to draw your attention to a new Hylo Visz appearance, The Old Republic: Smuggler's Vanguard, that I've added to the Appearances section of her article. I've added the {{update}} to the page and wanted to let you know so you can update it and keep it up to FA snuff. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 23:45, March 25, 2010 (UTC)
- Also, here's a new great quality image of her without the Timeline "hologram look" if you wanted to find a way to incorporate it into the article. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 23:48, March 25, 2010 (UTC)
Nala Shan
Hey Trayus; sorry it took me so long to get back to you. Unfortunately, if it's that noticeable a variation of spelling, then I don't think that it's reasonable to assume that it's the same character. If there was more available information, such as a reference to her service during the Battle of the Kaliida Nebula, then it would be easier to make the connection, but if no such info exists, I'd recommend that you just list it as a possible appearance and insert a Bts note somewhere. Hope that helps. (A possible conclusion is that this apparent new character is filling her absence in the wake of her transfer to the Ord Cestus facility.) Additionally, if you ever need timeline help with TCW, this page should be of much help to you. CC7567 (talk) 21:14, March 28, 2010 (UTC)
Update
Please make sure you update the TOR articles you are revising with a proper first-mention tag. Sources do not get the first-appearance tag. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:44, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks. Just remember that each article should have either a {{1st}} or {{1stm}} tag. In some instances, they may have both. For articles that have only a Sources list, there should be a {{1stm}} tag on something. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:52, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
- In that case, I would suggest simply adding the 1stm tag to any that apply. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:59, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
Rob Chestney on Hylo Visz's prominence in TOR
"I'll be honest and say she's not one of the most prominent characters in the game (for that, see 'Biographies')" —SWTOR.com/community forum post
I figure that (or other quotes from that thread) might be something you'll want to consider putting in the Bts section. —fodigg 20px (talk) | 18:03, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
WOTM
Wow, you'll make me blush. I didn't nominate articles up until one year ago, so I don't know if "long time" applies. But hey, good luck to you this month ;) Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:14, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
Just to let you know…
I am interested in working on Satele Shan's article. Personally, I'm glad the site put up a bio on her, so we can say once and for all on here that she's Bastila's descendant. Anyway, I won't do any serious work on her until the the TPB for Threat of Peace releases, and when the game releases, I would like your help with whatever info the game gives on her and all, since I will most likely not be able to play it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:57, April 8, 2010 (UTC)
- I think it would be a good idea to start one now, actually. I believe enough info has been released, when you do create it, go ahead and jot my name down on the members list!--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:52, April 8, 2010 (UTC)
RE: Templates
Hey Trayus. Sure, I can have a go at both tomorrow :-). Cheers, Grunny (talk) 09:43, April 17, 2010 (UTC)
- Two columns now. Grunny (talk) 10:27, April 17, 2010 (UTC)
- Hey Trayus. About your subpage template you wanted help with. Which specific fields did you want for it? Cheers, Grunny (talk) 00:51, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
SWTOR project
File:TOR logo shadow.png|With shadow File:WPTORtalk.png|No shadow Hey, I see you uploaded the SWTOR logo, and based on the file name, I can assume it's for a new TOR WookieeProject. If you'd like, I do have the logo with a transparent background if you'd like that instead so it'll look good on any background color on any template you create. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 23:14, April 22, 2010 (UTC)
- Here you go. Take your pick as to which to use. Both have transparent background, one has a shadow, one has the shadow removed. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 03:33, April 23, 2010 (UTC)
- I also went ahead and took the liberty of creating the talk page template {{WPTORtalk}}. Feel free to tweakthe background color as you like. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 03:59, April 23, 2010 (UTC)
TOR project invite
Sure, sounds awesome! I have to confess I don't know how the wookieeprojects work though. Is it just a matter of logging things on the project page? —fodigg 20px (talk) | 17:18, April 23, 2010 (UTC)
- Just joined, thanks for the invite. As I said before, I'll do major work on Satele's article once the TPB comes out. And have you seen the "Blood of the Empire" webcomic yet? Thank God the art is better. Oh, and I like the Holonet feature on the project page!--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:31, April 23, 2010 (UTC)
Duel on Coruscant (Inter-Sith Wars Period)
Sorry about the dupe. Just FYI, I have also created a page for the mission to Yavin 4 titled "Raid of Naga Sadow's Tomb". I have no problem if you wish to move that to "Mission to Yavin 4 (Inter-Sith War Period)", I just wanted stubs created for those so I didn't have red links in Eison Gynt and Barel Ovair. —fodigg 20px (talk) | 20:03, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Okay cool, thanks for letting me know. One question, does this create a conflict where the timeline is listed as Gynt's (First appearance) and yet is under "Sources" and not under "Appearances"? Just curious. —fodigg 20px (talk) | 20:16, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
Re: TCW episodes
Hey Trauys. I'll be on IRC for a little while if you can get on. CC7567 (talk) 22:42, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
Insider 114
Hey, Trayus. Do you remember the article's name that mentioned Cut Lawquane? JangFett (Talk) 23:13, April 27, 2010 (UTC)
Duel on Coruscant
Oops; sorry, I didn't realize that it was a GAN and jumped the gun and moved it myself under WP:DASH. Just to make sure that I didn't screw anything up, could you check that this is the proper formatting for the disambig name? If I'm interpreting WP:DASH correctly, it should be "Inter–Sith Wars Period." Sorry for any confusion that I might have caused. CC7567 (talk) 21:17, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
WotM
Congrats on winning Wookieepedian of the Month for May, Trayus! Grunny (talk) 03:12, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Congrats, Trayus. :) JangFett (Talk) 03:21, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Congrats from me as well. Well deserved. :-) -- 1358 (Talk) 05:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Would you be willing to do an interview for the Newsnet at some point? :-) Grunny (talk) 05:49, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Congrats. It was long overdue. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 05:57, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Cool. I'll email the questions to you through your user account in the next few days so you can take your time and answer them when you can :). Cheers, Grunny (talk) 06:03, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Congrats, dude. You definitely deserve it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:18, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Congrats on the WOTM, Trayus, very well-deserved. :) Jonjedigrandmaster 20px (We seed the stars) 13:41, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Congrats, dude. You definitely deserve it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:18, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Cool. I'll email the questions to you through your user account in the next few days so you can take your time and answer them when you can :). Cheers, Grunny (talk) 06:03, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Congrats. It was long overdue. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 05:57, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Would you be willing to do an interview for the Newsnet at some point? :-) Grunny (talk) 05:49, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Congrats from me as well. Well deserved. :-) -- 1358 (Talk) 05:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
Project
Sure. no problem at all. KingDonfin I am not Dumb I'll have you know I have an IQ of 19!!!!!
Re:TCW Proposition
Hey, Trayus. I'm on right now. But, if you don't have time to log into IRC, I can catch you there sometime. :) JangFett (Talk) 03:10, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
- Hey, Trayus, are you still planning on working on Chuchi? JangFett (Talk) 21:23, October 25, 2010 (UTC)
RE: Template
Hey Trayus. The template looks good and appears to be working fine :-). Cheers, Grunny (talk) 09:39, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
"Galactic Republic (Post–Great Hyperspace War)"?
I see that you're working on Sith Empire (Post–Great Hyperspace War), and I'm curious if we should also implement a Galactic Republic (Post–Great Hyperspace War). Now that I have my GANs approved, I figure I could work on a bigger project that I can work on generally until I get Gray Jedi successfully promoted. I'm just not sure if such an article would be appropriate. Thoughts? —fodigg 20px (talk) | 18:57, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
- The Sith Empire is a separate entity from the other Sith Empires, which is why it has its own article. The Republic is the same institution as seen in the prequels (or all other Star Wars works, for that matter), and thus only gets one article. --Imperialles 19:00, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
Allana Solo
- Oh, because it didn't make sense so I had thought that it was vandalism. But if you wanna update Allana's article with stuff from Millennium Falcon, Outcast, Omen, Abyss, and Backlash, then go ahead :) Sorry for the confusion--Darth Revanon 21:12, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
- Oh. Oops! Sorry for the confusion--Darth Revanon 21:36, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
Duel on Coruscant
Re: Saleucami
Sure, I'll try to take a look at it when I get the chance. CC7567 (talk) 01:24, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
Question
Isn't the Threat of Peace TPB supposed to come out tomorrow?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:41, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
- Yeah that is weird. I asked because one site says that it is coming out tomorrow, but it's not coming out in my comic shop. And the shop is really good with comic releases, which makes this all the more weird. I looked at Dark Horse's site, and it's not even there. I was planning to do heavy duty work on Shan starting Friday, too.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:42, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Alright, bu tthe only problem is that I cannot download them to my computer and, since I have to rely on my laptop and any location that has wifi access, I am not on long enough to be effective. Unless you have a means of which I could download them?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:26, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Much appreciated. Do you have a Facebook account? Just wondering, cause I'm on there.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:31, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks, man. I'm just anxious to get working on Shan' article, you know?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:38, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Oh, one other thing. Could you review Koffi Arana, if you get the chance?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:06, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- No worries, we all get busy sometimes. The way I see it, the busier and more productive one is on the Wook, the better. Thanks for reviewing!--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:56, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Oh, one other thing. Could you review Koffi Arana, if you get the chance?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:06, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks, man. I'm just anxious to get working on Shan' article, you know?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:38, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Much appreciated. Do you have a Facebook account? Just wondering, cause I'm on there.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:31, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Alright, bu tthe only problem is that I cannot download them to my computer and, since I have to rely on my laptop and any location that has wifi access, I am not on long enough to be effective. Unless you have a means of which I could download them?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:26, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
Saleucami review
Okay, here's what I have for you:
Is there any way that the infobox's "outcome" field can have something more descriptive than simply saying that Koth was rescued and that Grievous escaped? If it helps any, the Atlas states that Kenobi's and Grievous's duel was "inconclusive," so something along those lines might be appropriate. Even saying that the Republic's initial objective of rescuing Koth was completed while the capture of Grievous was unsuccessful might help the reader to better understand the battle's outcome as far as victories and losses went.This is my picky and aesthetic side talking, but can you avoid starting off two consecutive sentences with "During" in the intro?"would be intentionally boarded by Grievous and his battle droid forces": can this be reworded at all? The placement of the "intentionally" only indicates that Grievous intended to board the light cruiser—while he did intend to do that, I know that's not specifically what you're trying to say about Kenobi's plan. Please try to reword."The Clone Commander and his men were directly in the way of Grievous's escape route and engaged the General upon visual contact with him." Specifically, how did the clones "engage" Grievous? With their blasters? In close combat? In a lightsaber duel? Please specify."The man was Cut Lawquane, whom Rex immediately recognized as a clone trooper deserter from the Grand Army." Can this be reworded for factual correctness? Rex didn't recognize Lawquane as a deserter, only a clone trooper—he realized that Lawquane was a deserter after meeting him, but that isn't exactly the same thing.Can you clarify the Recusant destroyer model introduction in the Bts? While yes, the ship resembles the Episode III version, the guide for "Grievous Intrigue" only confirms that it was based on the Recusant, not that it specifically was a Recusant.Would it be possible to add something to the Bts section on the conjectural naming of the battle to reflect on specifically why it was named that way? Something like "The pre-existing battle necessitated the use of a new conjectural name for The Clone Wars battle" can make the context on the Siege of Saleucami itself (i.e. the fact that it took place much later in the war) more relevant to the Bts.- Other than that, fine work. As side notes, please watch both your linking and your typos—I highly recommend using a spell check for the latter—but other than that, it was very well written. If there were any issues with my prose-editing, feel free to revert and/or discuss them with me. CC7567 (talk) 06:03, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
Just a suggestion
You might want to create a shortcut for "WP:TOR". When I type "WP:TOR" in the search box and press go, it directs here.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:59, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- That's cool, I posted the link at the top pf the page, so all ya have to do is create the redirect.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:36, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
Sith Empire (Post–Great Hyperspace War)
I noticed that you are the major contributer to the article so I decided I would tell you instead of just going ahead and editing it. :) The Reason I wanted to edit it was because the article has 4,970 BBY listed as the date of establishment. I would like to point out that it must be 4,980 BBY because the Great Hyperspace War started and ended in 5,000 BBY. In desperation to escape the Republic once it had ended (5,000 BBY or not long after), the Emperor, his armada and most trusted Lords jumped into hyperspace. They made random jumps for 20 years before coming across Dromund Kaas (which means c. 4,980 BBY). In 4,904 BBY they started to rebuild and plotting revenge. The first century was dedicated to restoring the Empire there to its former glory and Kaas city was built as a testament to the Emperor. During this time the Emperor discovered and practiced dark rituals to prolong his life. So I would say date of establishment would definitely be about 4,980 BBY, instead of 4,970 BBY. I am not sure where the 4,870 BBY date comes from in the article? Is it referring to this century of rebuilding? :)—Obi-wan Jacobi 17px 06:41, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- OK, that's all fine, but where do you get this date of 4,990 BBY? I know you say that the Jedi/Republic and Sith were still having incursions for 10 years, but do you have a source for this? I ask out of interest in this case as well as concern for the article's accuracy. —Obi-wan Jacobi 17px 07:06, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- The only source I have heard about for a 4,990 BBY date for anything regarding the GHW was the Tales of the Jedi Omnibus, which put the events of The Fall of the Sith Empire at 4,990 BBY. This has since been recognised as a mistake however or has since been retconned, as all other sources use the date of 5,000 BBY. Full discussion regarding this is here. I have read on this wiki the date of 4,990 BBY for the final dissolution of the Sith Empire, but I have never seen/heard of the source of this information.—Obi–wan Jacobi 18px (Talk) 11:37, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- No problem! I'll change it now then, but if you find the source/information regarding 4,990 BBY could you please notify me? I would be very interested in what it says. :) —Obi–wan Jacobi 18px (Talk) 20:33, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks!—Obi–wan Jacobi 18px (Talk) 20:37, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- No problem! I'll change it now then, but if you find the source/information regarding 4,990 BBY could you please notify me? I would be very interested in what it says. :) —Obi–wan Jacobi 18px (Talk) 20:33, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
FAN
Hey, Trayus. Would you mind taking a look at your objections to Koffi Arana? I believe they've been addressed. Thanks. :) Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:05, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- No problem. Thanks again. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:19, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
Zinn Toa image
Hey, Trayus. I have a new image of Zinn Toa that's much more clearer, and could be used in the infobox. If you have time, I'll be on IRC, and I can show you the image to see if you like it. JangFett (Talk) 18:36, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
Review
I'll review your FAN on the Mission to Yavin 4 for ya. Might have a few questions.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:37, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- I thought I'd have some questions, but took a look at the Massassi article, and they were answered, happy to support. I'd appreciate it if you review Uthar Wynn or Vydel Dir'Nul.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:43, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
RE: Treaty Template
Fixed :). Grunny (talk) 23:17, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
- I wonder if it wouldn't be easier to make 4 separate "Terms" sections so that the terms for each side can be more neatly arranged. What do you think? - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 23:28, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Hahaha I just responded on Grunny's talk page. "...as far as this goes, I think it would be best to keep it in one field, as the terms would be across the board, and they don't always fit into a single faction. Like bringing a war to an end would apply to all factions." Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 23:29, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
Blood of the Empire
Just a little question. Does Blood of the Empire belong to the WP:TOR. If it does I would write a little bit for the project. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:23, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
Garza
Could you take a look at the changes I made to the article? Yeah, it might be too soon for a nom, but still.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:45, May 14, 2010 (UTC)
- I also wanted to ask about Artus' article. I feel it should be renamed "Mandalore the Vindicated", considering the bio itself says that Artus was his former name. Also, could you take a look at that article? I'm wondering what to do about a P&T…--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:52, May 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Great, I'll move it now. I'll also remove Mandalore's P&T, since nothing is known about his, well, P&T. As with Shan, I'll need your help with the info the game provides when it releases. Thanks, man.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:17, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
- And Chack just moved it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:25, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
- Great, I'll move it now. I'll also remove Mandalore's P&T, since nothing is known about his, well, P&T. As with Shan, I'll need your help with the info the game provides when it releases. Thanks, man.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:17, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
what is the "nom=y" variation on inuse?
I'm looking at Forum:CT:Inuse abuse and I have no idea what this is. Can you help me out? —fodigg 20px (talk) | 18:26, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
- I get that it's says "pending a GAN or FAN", but are we supposed to put a date in it or anything? —fodigg 20px (talk) | 18:33, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
Image query
Could you upload the image of Malak from the first timeline video? You'll get the best shot of him at 1:04 in the video.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:21, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for recommending JMAS, will ask him. I eventually gotta learn how to upload images, but I get by.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:20, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
The Emperor's image revealed!
Hey Trayus, wanted to get your opinion on the Emperor's new image.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:24, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
- No, he's definitely not what I expected either, expected a shriveled up prune like Palps, actually. Isn't there a debate going on on his article about his species? Why not just put "humanoid"?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:45, May 23, 2010 (UTC)
Sacking of Coruscant
Hey there. An article on the development of Threat of Peace was published today. It might have some interesting BTS tidbits for the Sacking of Coruscant article, which you GAed. Have a look, at least. --Imperialles 23:25, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
Re:CSWE
Yes I do, what do you need? If it's images, Green tentacle can help you, with anything else, I'm your guy.--Jedi Kasra (comlink)
- I'll see what I can do. I think they received entries, but I'll double-check. If not the entry they'd most likely be under would be Palpatine's, I'll let you know tomorrow.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:37, May 23, 2010 (UTC)
- And of course, congrats on successfully promoting WP:TOR's first FA!--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:54, May 23, 2010 (UTC)
- OK, here' what I got. There is no entry for the Security Act, and it's not mentioned anywhere that I can see However, the CSWE does have an entry on the Enhanced Security and Enforcement Act; here's the entry's contents:
- And of course, congrats on successfully promoting WP:TOR's first FA!--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:54, May 23, 2010 (UTC)
- A Galactic Senate measure passed during the Clone Wars that allowed the Chancellor's office unrestricted use of observation droids and searches and seizures without the need for warrants of due process. Senators Bail Organa and Padme opposed this act.
- Hope this helps. Let me know if you need anything else.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:33, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
- Glad I could be of assistance, let me know if you need anything else, CSWE or otherwise.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:55, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
Category
Hey Trayus. I wanted to let you know that I moved everything in Category:Battles of the Great War to Category:Battles of the Great Galactic War. The former is linked to on User:Dark Lord Trayus/ongoing project but I wasn't going to touch it since it's your page. - Brandon Rhea 15px (talk) 17:25, May 27, 2010 (UTC)
Minister of War (Sith Empire) - article.
There has been a minor issue regarding the verification of the Minister of War (Sith Empire) article, since you created the first link to the article Imperialles suggested asking you. Do you have/know the location of the source for the article, because I have searched around and come up with nothing. Thanks. ░▒▓ Alex | Talk ▓▒░ 21:56, May 27, 2010 (UTC)
Re:CSWE, again
No prob, I'll let you know tomorrow.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:58, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
- Hey. I saw this in recent changes and thought I'd let you know that WookieeProject Star Wars Encyclopedia has a entire forum page just for the purpose of obtaining entries from both the CSWE and the old SWE. You can find it at Forum:Entry requests. Requests posted there will usually receive a faster response than asking an individual user on their talk page. —Master Jonathan 20px (Jedi Council Chambers) 20:06, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the info Jonathan, I'll be sure to use that tool in the future. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 20:24, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Here ya go, the CSWE has an entry on the Reflex Amendment, here's what it has to say:
- A constitutional amendment that gave Supreme Chancellor Palpatine unprecedented control in maneuvering military assets across areas of overlapping jurisdiction, cutting through bureaucracy and taking priority over local governments.
- Hope this helps. Let me know if you need anything else.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:59, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
Force cage
Hey Trayus,
Can you do me a favor please? Since you are the Old Republic expert, I'm wondering if you can update Force cage with whatever information it is missing from Star Wars: The Old Republic, Threat of Peace Act 2: New Galactic Order. If you can that would be excellent, but if not, no problem either. Thank you,—Tommy 9281 05:27, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Hey man thanks alot. Everything looks good now, and I anticipate that its FA status will hold. Thanks again.—Tommy 9281 18:20, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
Review
Could you review Rawk if you get the chance?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:22, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Also, I'll review the Anti-Sith bill article for ya.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:28, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
Re: Mandalorians
Thanks a lot, Trayus. It's nice to see somebody notices when you're putting in the hours. :P Bella'Mia 23:51, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
Images
I was wondering if you ever took a look at the images I altered and sent to your email. If you need me to resend them, let me know.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:18, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Resent the email to you.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 05:27, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
- Alright, thanks for your input. Yeah, now that I look at it again, Mandalore's image is fuzzy.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 05:46, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
Hey Trayus, could you check your e-mail? I forwarded an interesting e-mail from Paul Kemp, you might want to forward this to Grand Moff Tranner.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:46, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
- And I forgot to finish my message! It should say "A similar thing was done for Eleena Daru."--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:48, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
- That's good to hear. The thing is uploading the e-mail in a fashion similar to this source for Eleena Daru.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:58, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
- Hey Trayus. Thanks for contacting me about this. I will need the screen capture to confirm - I believe you both, but I just need the link for the purpose of referencing the name and such in the article. Grand Moff Tranner 20px (Comlink) 00:11, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for helping me out, Trayus. That's exactly what I needed. I'll move and update the article now. Grand Moff Tranner 20px (Comlink) 14:06, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
Just a quick question
Do you have an account on the SWTOR site? I'm discussing the new timeline entry with some users, and wanted your input on it. I go by the same username, BTW.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:19, June 12, 2010 (UTC)
- Also, could you take a look at Malak's article when you get the chance? I added the info from the new timeline entry, want to see if it's well worded and all. Thanks.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:57, June 12, 2010 (UTC)
Hope
Here's the link, in case you don't have it already. I also sent you an e-mail asking your thoughts on it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:57, June 14, 2010 (UTC)
- It's a great trailer—I'll discuss it with you at length when I get the opportunity in a response to your email. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 09:49, June 15, 2010 (UTC)
- I see you put a {{wip}} tag on the Battle of Alderaan page. I've got loads of screenshots ready to go from the "Hope" trailer, so just let me know if there's any shot you want. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 01:34, June 15, 2010 (UTC)
- That's great JMAS, if you don't mind uploading what you have to my talk page, I'll find a place for them in the article. Thanks! Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 09:49, June 15, 2010 (UTC)
For Battle of Alderaan File:BattlefieldAlderaan-TORHope.jpg|The Sith Empire invades File:SithMarch-TORHope.jpg|Sith forces on the march File:BattleOfAlderaan-TORHope.jpg|Action shot 1 File:AlderaanMelee-TORHope.jpg|Action shot 2 File:RepublicReinforcements-TORHope.jpg|Republic reinforcements For Unidentified Republic trooper (Battle of Alderaan)|Unidentified Republic trooper File:SithExecutioners-TORHope.jpg|Sith Executioners File:Trooper vs Malgus.jpg|"Oh crap!" Here's what I have that I think could e used in the two respective articles. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 03:33, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
- Ah, thank you so much JMAS. I'll add these to the article as I go along writing it. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 14:32, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
- I hope you don't mind my adding another image to the Battle of Alderaan article. You have indicated in the past that you trust my judgement in adding quotes/audio and/or images to articles you're working on. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 14:34, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
Question for you regarding the Republic trooper. I uploaded and you're using the image of his about to executed by Sith Warriors. I also have the almost identical image from a few seconds later that shows the same scene, only with the Jedi chick kneeling on the ground with her blue Force deal lighting the ground right before she blasts the Sith Warriors away. Would that be preferable do you think? - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 23:26, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
- If you would like to upload it, then by all means, feel free. I'll trust your judgment on whether or not you feel it would be superior to the current version. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 06:01, June 18, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the trust in my judgment. I've changed my mind though. Looking at the image again, the special effect used to make the blue Force glow when her fist hits the ground tends to blur the subject matter. Best to keep it as is. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 14:50, June 18, 2010 (UTC)
Amendment
Hey Trayus,
Just wanted to let you know that I made a minor amendment to the wording of the CT you voted on. Per Hydro's suggestion, I added in "and source material" to account for things like endnotes and stuff. Menkooroo 23:54, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
FAN name change
Since it is established that Unidentified Republic trooper (Battle of Alderaan) was a commander of Havoc Squad, might I recommend moving the article to Unidentified Havoc Squad commander? This would shorten the title slightly and remove the need to use parentheses in the article name, which to my understanding, is preferable whenever possible. I know you trust my judgment, but one something major like a page move for a FAN, I strongly believe you should make the call. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 16:59, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
- Calling him a commander would be speculation at this point. Member would work. --Imperialles 17:24, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
- Poking my nose into the conversation here a minute...
I think JMAS has a point, considering that while he may or may not hold the official military rank of Commander, he is a commander in the sense that he's the one giving the commands. The trailer clearly depicts him giving orders to the other members of his squad. Bella'Mia 17:50, June 19, 2010 (UTC)- I'm comfortable with either option—both would be accurate, and I suppose if it is preferable not to have parenthetical notations, then moving the article would be the best option. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 05:30, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
- Or we could just move it to Unidentified Republic trooper, seeing as how the parenthesis are unnecessary considering we have no other article on an unnamed Republic trooper. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 20:33, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
- I figured having the Havoc Squad in there would be better because once the game is out, I'm sure there will be other unidentified Republic troopers. Imp has a point though. Is is confirmed he is a commander of Havoc Squad. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 01:48, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
- He's not confirmed as a ranked commander, but in the video he's serving the role of a commander, as he's issuing commands to his fellow troopers. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 02:11, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
- So that poses the question that should be answered before the page gets moved, as I don't want to move it and have it end up being an objection point for the GAN. Do you think we should move this from here to the comments area of the GA nomination page? - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 13:12, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
- He's not confirmed as a ranked commander, but in the video he's serving the role of a commander, as he's issuing commands to his fellow troopers. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 02:11, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
- I figured having the Havoc Squad in there would be better because once the game is out, I'm sure there will be other unidentified Republic troopers. Imp has a point though. Is is confirmed he is a commander of Havoc Squad. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 01:48, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
- Poking my nose into the conversation here a minute...
Greenputt CANs
Hey Trayus. I noticed on my watchlist that when you struck your objection to Professional Greenputt Tour on WP:CAN, you increased the vote count on that article but didn't leave a support vote. Did you mean to support it, or do you still have an issue with it? Thanks for the reviews, by the way. —Master Jonathan 20px (Jedi Council Chambers) 20:58, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
Re: The Old Republic Project
Thanks for the offer Trayus! As more details emerge it seems that Bioware is keeping to its tradition of awesome characters and story, so I'll definitely be interested once it comes out. I'd be honored to sign on with the Project and help out with managing the inevitable torrents of information. JethLordMaster18px (Xia Order) 06:27, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
New choices!
Hey Trayus,
Just letting you know that I brightened and cropped option 3 on Luke's talk page. Check it out. Menkooroo 06:41, June 22, 2010 (UTC)
- Just wanted to let you know that I've added two new Luke Skywalker options for voting if you want to go take a look. - JMAS 20px Hey, it's me! 16:04, June 22, 2010 (UTC)
Re: FAN
Thanks. I realize that I may come off as stubborn and unreasonable at times, but it has never been my intention to force my particular way of doing things on others. I hope that you don't feel that way—I was merely trying to suggest a way to very slightly improve the article. Sure, it was a little pedantic, but then again this is Wookieepedia; pedantic is what we do. :P Anyway, I just wanted to let you know I'm sorry if you felt forced to do anything you felt lowered the quality of the article. If you still disagree, I am always open to discussion, and it is ultimately your work we're talking about—you get the final say. I hope you'll continue writing more excellent articles. --Imperialles 21:47, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
Excerpt from "Deceived"
Here you go, Trayus. Awesome stuff.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:54, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
- I know, right? Tranner's got the awesome stuff, Malgus, Zallow… Hey, at least your trooper isn't a pushover, can't wait to find out info about him and the Jedi.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:33, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
Nuvo Vindi
Hey, you may already be aware of this, but in case you're not, The Clone Wars Character Encyclopedia apparently identifies Vindi as a Faust. Just letting you know since you FAed him. Chack Jadson (Talk) 14:50, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
Domaine de la Maison sur le Lac
New category?
Hi Trayus, should a new category be created for the Sith Lords of the resurgent Sith Empire? Malgus, for example, is currently under the category "Sith Lords of the Sith Empire." If the category is created, Malgus and the other Lords would fall under here, as would Revan and Malak.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:41, June 27, 2010 (UTC)
- Yeah Kasra, that's a great idea. If you wouldn't mind creating it I'd be very grateful. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 23:56, June 27, 2010 (UTC)
- No prob, man.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:00, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
- Created. And I think I got all the Sith Lords of the Empire under the category, and I removed the category for the first Sith Empire's Lords.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:15, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks Kasra! That category's definitely going to be useful as more material comes out. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 00:34, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
- No problem, Trayus.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:32, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks Kasra! That category's definitely going to be useful as more material comes out. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 00:34, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
- Created. And I think I got all the Sith Lords of the Empire under the category, and I removed the category for the first Sith Empire's Lords.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:15, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
- No prob, man.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:00, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
Unlocking The Old Republic page
Dark Lord Trayus, this is TrooperOnasi and I happen to be a massive fan of The Old Republic ever since its conception as well. I would like to update the Old Republic page but I find that it is locked. Is it possible to get it unlocked so I can make some updates?
TrooperOnasi, out.
Re:TCW Character Encyclopedia
Hey, Trayus. There is nothing new about Suu. We still don't know if Suu married a Human prior to marrying Cut. Also, it doesn't even say when she married Cut. The guide explains that Suu married a former clone trooper named Cut, and Suu's Twi'lek/Human hybrid children became his stepchildren. Basically, that's it. :) JangFett (Talk) 01:59, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
Another query
Do you think that Revan and Malak are subject to the TOR project? I think so, now that they are confirmed to have been Sith Lords of the resurgent Sith Empire, but wanted to get your opinion.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:35, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
- Yeah, I agree with you. There's going to be enough new information on them from The Old Republic that I feel our members should do what they can to improve the pages. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 03:06, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
- Very good, I'll add the link to their respective talk pages. Thanks.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 03:21, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
Character Encyclopedia
When you do end up wanting that info from the Star Wars: The Clone Wars Character Encyclopedia on your horde of update-tagged articles, let me know. :P CC7567 (talk) 02:30, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Yeah, since you need so much info, it might be better if you can look directly at the source when you're updating the articles. However, if you can't get the book by the Inqmoot (next week Saturday), I'd be happy to provide you with the info so that none of the articles have to get probed. Let me know if that's the case. CC7567 (talk) 07:18, July 4, 2010 (UTC)
Review query
Would you mind reviewing Knol Ven'nari if you get the chance?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:44, July 4, 2010 (UTC)
EV-A4-D
Hey Trayus. I think there was a bit more info on EV-A4-D from the Character Encyclopedia. Gor's entry states that the droid attached the four mechanical arms on his back, so that might be worthy of a mention in the article. Cheers, CC7567 (talk) 23:07, July 4, 2010 (UTC)
Battle of the Sluis sector
That article with a really short name
- As an added note, what do you think about dividing "The emergency session and its failure" subsection into two subsections: "The emergency section" and "Aftermath." (I left a note on the nom, but was edit-conflicted with another support, and I didn't want to hold up archiving the nom for something this trivial.) Anyway, what are your thoughts on this? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:11, July 7, 2010 (UTC)
- Looks good to me; the sections are short, but I think it's a bit more fitting. Great work on the article :). Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:56, July 7, 2010 (UTC)
Enhanced Security and Enforcement Act
I added an external link to CUSWE for you, great job on the article, BTW. Is it nearly complete?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 03:06, July 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Oh, never mind. Got my answer. Mind if I give ya a review?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 03:08, July 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Alright, I'll download the article and review it tonight, and will (possibly) have objections for you tomorrow. Thanks. Oh, and since the TOR comics begin Thurdsay, expect to see some work from me on Satele shortly.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 03:21, July 8, 2010 (UTC)
Sith magic
Hey DLT,
Have you come across any instances or mentions of Sith magic in your TOR travels?—Tommy 9281 03:32, July 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Many thanks, friend, for that vital information. I ask another favor of you now, one that is a bit confusing for me but should be relatively simple for you. I've incorporated the information you gave me into the article, but I don't know how/where it should actually go in the appearances or sources list. Do you mind adding these appearances/sources in their appropriate places please? Thanks,—Tommy 9281 11:55, July 8, 2010 (UTC)
Satele Shan
Hey Trayus, I (finally) made some edits to Shan, could you check them out? After the third issue is released, the info is added, and you, Menkooroo, and MJ pre-nom review the article, I plan on taking it to the FAs.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:00, July 10, 2010 (UTC)
- I won't be able to access Fatal Alliance, and I know it has Shan in the book. If you read it, could you e-mail complete details of her role in the book? And new info, should her age be revealed, etc., would also work. Thanks in advance!--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 04:21, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:42, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
Re: UK Comics?
Hey Trayus. Technically, I'm not supposed to tell you this (:P), but this site has scans of all the UK comics. As far as I can remember, the UK comics don't have any new info on Clovis (they're basically kid-centered comics that provide canonical info from time to time), but you can check yourself. (If you have problems locating the comics in the hundred-some pages of that forum thread, you can Google the site and look for "UK comic v6.1," "v6.8," etc., which is what they're usually under.) Also, regarding IRC, my time has been bogged down greatly by summer school, but I'll try to find you on there sometime. :P Hope that helps. CC7567 (talk) 07:56, July 13, 2010 (UTC)
IRC
Hey, Trayus, I saw your message on IRC. Sorry I couldn't respond to you eariler. Also, thanks for updating the WP:TCW page for me, heh. I was about to remove Axe until I already saw you had done it. :) JangFett (Talk) 14:36, July 13, 2010 (UTC)
End of the Great Hyperspace War
Hi again, Dark Lord Trayus. I am wondering if you have come across that source that said the Great Hyperspace War ended in 4,990 BBY that you told me about a while back. The reason I ask is that I am re-writing the Sith species article now, and the Great Hyperspace War is a very important part of their history. Also, I see my edit from long ago changing 4,970 BBY to 4,980 BBY as date of establishment has been changed. Thank you! :) —Obi–wan Jacobi 18px (Talk) 20:27, July 15, 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you very much. I have had a look at TEA and other sources, and have since built up a detailed and accurate chain of events for the Great Hyperspace War. To be honest, I would not be too certain that the Second Battle of Korriban marked the end of the War.... It is all we see up to in the comics because that's basically when the main antagonist's (Naga Sadow) story ends, and the Republic pretty much guarantee victory. But there is war still happening after the second battle over Korriban, as detailed in TEA with Shar Dakhan as acting Dark Lord etc etc. So then, if that was not part of the Great Hyperspace War, what was it? I would also find it believable that the period following the comics' events could possibly last for 10 years or so, but if the events of the comics were meant to take 10 years I don't think that is very realistic. Anyway, you mentioned in our previous conversation that you thought the 4,990 BBY date could have been in an Essential Guide. I do not have The New Essential Chronology, but I have TEA and most other Essential Guides that would talk about the war, so maybe it might be in that. If you happen to have the New Essential Chronology, would you mind checking it for me if you have the time? Thanks again! —Obi–wan Jacobi 18px (Talk) 22:34, July 15, 2010 (UTC)
Malak
Hey Trayus, if you get the chance, could you review Malak? Feel free to review my other noms, as well. Looking forward to your reviews.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:51, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks, Trayus. Don't worry too much about the others, to me, Malak is the most important to get through.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 08:49, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
- Hey, my friend. How's everything been? I'll review Chantique soon, been busy, as I'm sure you have. Anyway, could you finish you review of Malak? If you can't, I understand and appreciate the review that you gave.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:00, November 12, 2010 (UTC)
Book templates
I put up a discussion on the SH for the possible creation of a book template. Discussion Forum:SH:Book templates|here.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:18, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
Valorum
Sorry for removing the Valorum stuff on you. I probably created an edit conflict. Didn't realize you're probably working on it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:35, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
Valorum, 2
Quick query: "When TriPlanetary questioned a self-described "avid reader" on her decision not to purchase Holding Back the Tide, they stated that they simply weren't interested in the former Chancellor, but that they may be motivated to buy the product after Valorum's death." You go from referring to the reader as "her" to 'they," unless I'm missing something. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:41, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
- That was my mistake - the quote sounded feminine, so I guess I assigned it a gender initially then forgot about it a few words later. It's been fixed—thanks for pointing that out. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 23:43, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
- Sure, just noticed it on RC, clicked on it, and saw that odd phrasing. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:51, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
New Project Lead for KotOR
Hello there Trayus. I was wondering whether you would support a change in leadership of KotOR from Cylka to Jedi Kasra. Cylka is a great user, but she hasn't been around for quite some time now. I believe new leadership is needed, and Kasra is our most active member. Let me know what you think. Thanks, SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 22:23, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
- I wanted to cordially invite you to attend the KotOR IRC meeting, at 0:00 Thursday at the KOTOR channel (8:00 PM Wednesday). Since the TOR project is closely involved with subjects of KotOR, I feel that our projects need to work closely, if you will.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:53, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
- By all means. I mean, the timeline vids, Satele, and other information make it seem silly for both out projects to not work together. I view any collaboration our projects will have to be essential. Oh, on an unrelated note, could you please review my current GANs? I'll review your CANs.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:01, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks, I really am humbled by all of your guy's support. I'll be sure to not let any of you down. BTW, how's Fatal Alliance? Is it a good story?—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:05, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Missed you at the meeting. There'll be another sometime, so perhaps you'll be able to attend that one.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:08, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
- No worries, dude.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:49, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Missed you at the meeting. There'll be another sometime, so perhaps you'll be able to attend that one.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:08, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks, I really am humbled by all of your guy's support. I'll be sure to not let any of you down. BTW, how's Fatal Alliance? Is it a good story?—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:05, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
- By all means. I mean, the timeline vids, Satele, and other information make it seem silly for both out projects to not work together. I view any collaboration our projects will have to be essential. Oh, on an unrelated note, could you please review my current GANs? I'll review your CANs.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:01, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
IRC
Do you go on IRC? Because I finally figured out how to get on, and I'm on right now.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:44, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
EC
Hey Trayus. Since you were serving as an EC before the CT went through for the CANs, and doing a fine job of it, would you accept a nomination to be formally put on the EC list? Let me know. Cheers, Grunny (talk) 01:00, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
Re:
Sorry about that. Honestly, I was in a bad mood and after I saw a few typos and a missing CAnom template in a CAN you'd supported, I acted rashly and sort of forgot my frustration was irrelevant to you. I've since thought it over and de-struck my vote. It's not because you've asked me about it, but because I've thought about it objectively again. I know that may not seem like a vote of confidence in you, but honestly it is: I wouldn't have voted for you in the first place and I wouldn't de-strike unless I thought you were a worthy candidate. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:16, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
RE: Sith magic
Hey Trayus,
Thanks for that bit of info. I've read the latest release, however, and I don't quite think that it fits totally. Especially since Exal repeatedly makes a point of saying that the Emperor intended to fill her with his power, not exactly his spirit. Thoughts?—Tommy 9281 21:18, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
- I agree. She probably is talking about essence transfer, but I've noticed that Exal likes to talk cryptically in riddles...let's see where it goes from there.—Tommy 9281 22:06, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
Re: WP:TOR
Hey Trayus, thanks for the invitation. Yes I've read Fatal Alliance, and I have all intentions of reading Paul's Deceived the moment it hits the shelves. RL constraints have me not writing out full FA/GA articles as much as I'd like to recently, but I'll do my best to update and write up on article subjects from the novels as much as I can. Thanks again for the invite, I'll sign up momentarily. :) Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 22:13, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
An invite and offer
First, I wanna formally invite you to join WP:KOTOR. We can talk more about this if you'd like. Secondly, I noticed that you put Chantique and Trayus Academy as future projects…If you need any help with them, I got all the comics and sources and am willing to help you with whatever you need.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 06:41, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for joining, great to have you aboard! And the forum idea is awesome, as you know, this will be a big help to me personally and others as well.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:45, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
EduCorps
Hi Trayus. Congratulations, you are now a member of the EduCorps! :-) Feel free to start using the {{EC}} template on your votes. Cheers, Grunny (talk) 15:10, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Congrats, dude!—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:28, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
Ventress
Well, good luck with Ventress man…with those retcons in Season Three, you might need it. :P Anyway, just wanted to say that she looks like she's coming quite well so far. I'm on IRC now, if you want to chat some—it's been a while. CC7567 (talk) 02:37, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
- Maybe another time then—IRC has been acting up lately. But yeah, I have to agree that I seriously doubt that a good amount of EU research can amount to any retconning of this size and nature. With luck, this will all be a dream that Ventress had, nothing more. :P CC7567 (talk) 04:51, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
- I just would like to thank you for your effort on the "young Ventress" background. I see the thing pretty much as you. But I'm convinced that we don't even need to speak about mental manipulation by the Nighsister. If Ventress escaped from her adoptive parents death, then was found by her "master", you can conserve all the flashback. The only thing is her depiction, but we must not forget that it was the memories of a local Warlord. Perhaps can we consider that the depiction in Hate and Fear emanate from the Warlord perspective, a generalisation of his "actual" look. On the Narec's death : we can consider than the Weequay was at the order of the Warlords assembly. That don't need any retcon, since, no explanation is given in those episode flashbacks.
Anyway, good luck ! I'm sure we can keep the entire Clone Wars background and make something coherent. Le Passant 09:39, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
Review query
Hey Trayus, could you review Darth Revan's Sith Holocron if you get the chance? Thanks in advance.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:43, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
Shao to Gok
Hi Trayus. I had a go at addressing your objection to Shao to Gok on the CAN page. Can you take another look when you get a moment? Thanks. --Eyrezer 09:27, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
Telos Holocron
Hey, if you're not going to finish everything within a few hours, would you mind moving your work to a subpage? I'd be more than happy to delete the subpage once you have transferred the completed work to the mainspace article. Let me know. :) Graestan(Talk) 21:57, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
Shan and Fatal Alliance
Hey Trayus, forgot to ask you this on IRC the other day. First, how was the book? And whenever you can give me every detail pertaining to Shan, I'd greatly appreciate it.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:40, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
- Much appreciated, no worries about the delay, we all have business to take care of every now and then.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:08, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
Yo
Lord Trayus,
Have you checked your email? And as a side note, you and I both have birthdays on the horizon. Any plans?—Tommy 9281 16:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
Our friend the Emperor
Are you so sure, Lord Trayus? The ritual of essence transfer requires a suitable host body that the performer will then inhabit if performed properly. From what I gathered, the Emperor is only pouring his essence into these being's minds. Slight technicality, I know, but I have to go back to what the Emperor himself said about Exal Kressh, how he sees " through her eyes," something she confirmed in later issues. I think that while similar, this ritual is still something slightly different. I would certainly love, however, if they would just stop bee-essing and used the karking term. Until then…—Tommy 9281 18:44, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
- As for that, I did read the link you posted for me, and thank you. I was reading the abilities listed for the Sith sorcerer class, and so far, they have yet to list Sith magic or any associated abilities with that class of character. We can add this new revelation to the Sith sorcerer article, but I don't think that it needs to be input just yet into the Sith magic article itself.—Tommy 9281 19:48, August 27, 2010 (UTC)