Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Voren Na'al

Voren Na'al

• Originally nominated by: JSarek
• Last featured on: August 13, 2007
• Changes since last review: diff
• Date placed on this page: May 15, 2011

(2 Inqs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Menkooroo 15:30, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
2. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:30, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
3. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 03:15, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
4. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 14:33, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Jeffrey
   • Intro seems way too short. It could easily be expanded with some mentions of some of his more noteworthy specific assignments.
     • Here's the part where I gripe lengthily about the length of intros in featured articles. Now, here's the part where I try and satisfactorily fix it anyway. jSarek 08:27, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
   • I'm confused by ref [19] --- is "Academician" actually a term used in canon to describe Na'al? If so, ref [19] needs to state where in canon it's used. Menkooroo 17:29, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
     • Clarified that it's from the same source as the rest of the paragraph. jSarek 08:27, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• Checking the difference between versions, it amuses me that the old version was considered good to go when nothing in the infobox was sourced. =P Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 03:15, June 23, 2011 (UTC)