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Lumiya's lightwhip

Things to do

  • General underlinking
  • Dating issues:
    • 4 ABY is essentially exclusive to the infobox. It's been pipelinked into the article body, but it should really be used in both places if it's being used in one.
    • Neither of the dates (ABY and GrS) in the infobox's created field are sourced correctly
    • Would definitely recommend double checking to see that 40 ABY can be sourced straight to Betrayal
  • Some of the image placement in the article body is a little awkward. The image in a "A Sith weapon" could be moved into the middle of that section, as could the image in "Later usage" to give the article a more natural, balanced flow and spacing between images. And the BTS can just be aligned right to make it look better.
  • BTS needs to mention full publication date of first appearance and can remove any sentences regurgitating the Appearances/Sources, and not all of that section is sourced
  • The Legacy of the Forces Miniatures thing in the Sources list can presumably cite a specific item with the appropriate citation template
  • Starships & Vehicles 33 should mention a specific section as is done with Fact Files
  • Ref 3 needs to use CSWECite
  • Ref list could probably use a scroll box.

Removal of FA status

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