Larry

Things to do

  • A bit of underlinking
  • Intro could use a pararaph break to accommodate Wikia skin
  • Biography could be subsectioned, which will allow for an additional quote. Image thumbnail sizes could also be enlarged somewhat within the Bio.
  • The second Bio image could do a little better job of cropping off the sliver of border on the left side
  • The second and third sentences of the BTS aren't really necessary. And the last sentence is unsourced.
  • Ref 2 should really use employ the SWE citation template in order to use the backup link, since that page is no longer active
  • The Leland Chee SW.com reference for the 3 ABY date is merely repeating information that comes from Behind the Magic. Why can't this article just source that date to the source itself?

Removal of FA status

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