Jutka

Things to do

  • The intro doesn't need to be three paragraphs. Compared to the size of the Bio, it looks a little on the large size. Two solid paragraphs should be enough.
  • 8 ABY likely can/t be sourced straight to DarkStryder material without an explanatory note. And the 19 ABY date is intro-exclusive and is definitely not self-sourcing.
  • General underlinking and redirect
  • Format quote and image attributions correctly for punctuation
  • The body images should be reformatted so they're not running into the section's quotes. Additionally, the Talon Karrde image could use a more descriptive caption, as could the P/T image to justify its usage there.
  • Any Equipment section?
  • BTS unsourced.

Removal of FA status

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