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GH-7

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Support

  1. .... 00:26, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
  2. Lord Hydronium 03:53, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
  3. I'd kind of like to see the intro expanded a little bit. It's better than Ravager's, but still on the short side. Cull Tremayne 13:12, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
    I expanded it a bit, is that better?-Solus (Bird of Prey) 13:51, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
    Nice. Cull Tremayne 14:18, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
    Thank you. -Solus (Bird of Prey) 14:28, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
  4. Atarumaster88 21:38, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
  5. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:22, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
  6. —Xwing328(Talk) 05:45, 1 June 2007 (UTC)

Object

  1. Parts of the "Description" section are redundant with the "Capabilities" section. Thanks Solus and Eyrezer. —Xwing328(Talk) 05:45, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
    Will fix sometime today.-Solus (Bird of Prey) 12:51, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
    Fixed now, I think. Sorry I'm late.-Solus (Bird of Prey) 12:28, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
  2. Intro contains unsourced info that isn't expanded later. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:38, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
    I know nothing about its use on Boz Pity, so if no one else does, I'll just cut it from the article.-Solus (Bird of Prey) 12:51, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
    That would be a shame. Based on the sources list, it's probably from Star Wars: Obsession. If somebody could check that and write something, that would be better than removing it. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:14, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
    I guess it is. I don't have the comic, though, and I don't know anyone who does.-Solus (Bird of Prey) 16:55, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
    Found and added the content.-Solus (Bird of Prey) 00:50, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

Things to do

  • Remove redundant information. —Xwing328(Talk) 22:19, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
    • Fixed, I think.-Solus (Bird of Prey) 12:28, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
      • From Xwing's talk page: "It still seems redundant to me, especially the part where both sections discuss the droid's three arms. Some of that information could probably be moved to the other section, or maybe those two sections could be merged." --Eyrezer 01:46, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
        • I've given it a rewrite which will hopefully resolve it. --Eyrezer 04:49, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
  • Add something about use on Boz Pity to main article. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:38, 23 April 2007 (UTC)

Remove Objection

Comments

  • If all the objections have been addressed here, this can be moved to the queue. Atarumaster88 14:43, 18 May 2007 (UTC)
    • Thanks Ataru. I've already sent Xwing a note on this one so you don't need to worry about it. --Eyrezer 03:55, 19 May 2007 (UTC)