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Ferus Olin

  • Status: Former featured Article (other options are "featured article", "former featured article", and "article")

Things to do

  • Sourcing.
  • Sectioning.
    • Condensing excessive play-by-play would deal with this, imo
  • Has improvement tag.
  • POV.
  • Prose issues.
    • Flowery prose.
    • Play-by-play.
    • Reunion section is poorly written. (e.g. "Padawan vs. Sith wannabe")
    • Mission to Naboo is poorly written.
      • Mostly done
    • Resolve Return to the Jedi Order section overall.
      • Mostly done
  • Personality and Traits section.
  • I'll just quote 4dot here: "'Though he had previously felt Malorum's force sensitivity, Ferus never expected the dark-sider to unveil his crimson bladed lightsaber!' Do we need any other reason?"

Removal of FA status

  • FA status removed per IRC meeting.

Comments

  • Over the next few days, I will be majorly editing the section of this article I know most about, Return to the Jedi Order. If there it gets too long or you have any suggestions, contact me on my talk page or the discussion for this article. By the way, what sourcing does this article require? I don't know any sources other than the ones already listed, so if anyone has any others, please help me out.Hobbes15(Tiger Headquarters)

(Leader of the Tigers) 00:38, 4 April 2007 (UTC)

  • I have rewritten Ferus up to Agent of the Empire, and believe that I have fixed all of Return to the Jedi Order except for that. All the issues mentioned except perhaps the play-by-play have been resolved in my opinion. However, I haven't added a personality and traits section, and there are still a few parts of the article that I haven't got to yet. The only things I feel remain a problem are the Personality and Traits, Agent of the Empire, and perhaps the entire section before Return of the Jedi Order- I haven't gotten the chance to look at it. If someone could check out the article and let me know on my talk page if there is anything I could do to improve the article further, I would appreciate it. Hobbes15(Tiger Headquarters)

(Leader of the Tigers) 14:50, 7 April 2007 (UTC)