Wookieepedia:Inq/Empatojayos Brand

Empatojayos Brand

Things to do

• Year references need elaboration unless the relevant events are explicitly mentioned in the source.
  • 32 BBY year reference for the Battle of Naboo. NEC, page 40
  • Reference for the "nine months after the battle of Geonosis": The Bassadro Massacre. 21 BBY (9 months after the Battle of Geonosis) NEC, page 65
  • Year reference for the proclamation of the Empire: Anakin Turns to the Dark Side. 19 BBY (3 years after the Battle of Geonosis). …he instituted martial law, making a speech before the Senate, where he proposed a new society, an "Empire that will stand for a thousand years NEC, page 84
  • Year reference in "Return to the fight" section. The section talks about the discovery of Brand: The Resurrection of Emperor Palpatine. 10 ABY. …Along the way they also found another Jedi warrior, Empatojayos Brand,… NEC, page 158
  • Year reference in the infobox and "the end of Palpatine" section, which provides Brand's death date: Palpatine Vaquished. 11 ABY.…Clasping himself to the light, Brand held the Emperor's presence within his body, as they both succumbed to death. NEC, page 159
  • Year reference in the Bts for the marriage of Luke Skywalker and Mara Jade in the Union comics: The Marriage of Luke and Mara. 19 ABY. NEC, page 194 QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:00, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
    • You missed 22 BBY. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:04, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
• Higher quality images (digital images)
  • All comic images replaced with digital versions. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 07:10, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
• Mention publication years in the BTS
  • Mentioned. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:00, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
• Format images bette. including placement and thumbnail size
  • Adjusted. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:00, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
    • For Oasis, the thumbnail size should be made larger, not smaller. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:02, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
• Bts is rather unstructured (paragraph breaks)
  • Restructured. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:00, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
    • I don't see a single paragraph break. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:02, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
• Duplicate links.Imperators II^(Talk) 12:02, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • Major linking overhaul has been made. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:20, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
• Quotes from comics need to be sourced to specific issues. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:02, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • Fixed. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:20, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
• The reference note for 22 BBY should be changed to point to a template describing the GrS reference.
  • Does that work now? QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 10:45, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
• The double references in the article should be cleaned up.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 19:23, April 22, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 10:45, May 6, 2018 (UTC)

Removal of FA status

• Article put on probation at Meeting 89. 1358 ^(Talk) 22:34, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
• Probation extended at Meeting 90. Exiled Jedi (talk) 19:23, April 22, 2018 (UTC)
• Status kept at Meeting 91. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:38, June 6, 2018 (UTC)

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