Wookieepedia:Inq/Coruscant Security Force

Coruscant Security Force

Things to do

• Multiple instances of oversized paragraphs. Look at article in Wikia skin and add paragraph breaks throughout article where needed. For example, the final paragraph in the "Rule of the Empire" section is 19 lines long.
  • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 20:37, December 3, 2017 (UTC)
• Paragraph breaks means more space for images -- add more if available
  • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 07:59, December 23, 2017 (UTC)
• Subsection BTS
  • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 06:08, December 23, 2017 (UTC)
• Go through and review BTS referencing. For example, this entire sentence is sourced to the AOTC film, which doesn't work: "Under the new canon established on April 25, 2014, the Coruscant Security Force was first mentioned indirectly in the film Star Wars: Episode II Attack of the Clones, which was released on May 16, 2002, when Anakin Skywalker states that protection is supposed to be the job of the 'local security.'"
  • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 21:28, December 3, 2017 (UTC)
    • The film's release date still can't be sourced to the film itself. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:34, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
• Add specific BBY/ABY dates throughout article as possible and reference them properly. Much of this article was written before Canon fully started utilizing the BBY/ABY system, so there are no hard dates anywhere within this article.
  • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 08:38, December 23, 2017 (UTC)
• All relevant updates were added from Star Wars: Darth Vader: Dark Lord of the Sith. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 14:13, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
• The article has been landed in Category:Pages with missing permanent archival links (check under your Preferences to see if viewing hidden categories is enabled for you), which means one or several of the citation templates used in the article is lacking a backup link. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:26, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
• In the "Civil unrest" section, something's not right with the quote's punctuation. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:33, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
• BTS gives undue weight to the subject's Legends appearances. Only the concrete source (not series!) which first featured the CSF is relevant to the Canon subject and should therefore be mentioned.
• Also, this being a Canon article, the BTS shouldn't lead with the Legends information. The most relevant info for the reader is the subject's first Canon appearance. The Legends info should be moved to further in the section.
• The TCW episode release dates can't be sourced to the episodes themselves. The BTS really needs to be checked for thorough referencing. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:52, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
• Ref 46 should implement {{Titan}}. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:53, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

Removal of FA status

• Placed on probation at Meeting 85. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:26, November 19, 2017 (UTC)
• Probation extended at Meeting 86. Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:25, December 29, 2017 (UTC)
• FA status removed at Meeting 87. Exiled Jedi (talk) 03:47, January 28, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

• I realize that not all objections have been met, however I'm still planning on addressing them. I would also note that it looks like there is possibly more material upcoming from the comic series that will need to be updated next month anyways. An extension on this review would be appreciated. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 19:31, December 16, 2017 (UTC)
• All objections have now been taken care of. However, while the updates for Star Wars: Darth Vader: Dark Lord of the Sith are not listed above they still need to be added as of this time. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 08:38, December 23, 2017 (UTC)
  • I've completed adding the relevant information from Darth Vader: Dark Lord of the Sith 8, Part III, and Part IV. The article is now fully up to date. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 14:11, January 13, 2018 (UTC)