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Callista Ming

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Support

  1. --Eyrezer 04:26, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
  2. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:24, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
  3. Gonk (Gonk!) 20:04, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
  4. Lord Hydronium 06:00, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
  5. Greyman(Paratus) 14:02, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

Things to do

  • Majorly expand Murder in Slushtime --Eyrezer 13:46, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
  • Info from Droids and the Force re: Callista and clues leading to the Iron Knights. --Eyrezer 01:03, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
  • The info on her time on the Eye with Luke needs to be expanded. 3 lines for what is essentially a book? How about detail about what she actually did to aid him? Perhaps also a note about why Cray was so willing to give up her body re Nichos. SOme context for it.
    • Addressed. I could go into even more detail, but that's pushing the play-by-play boundary, and a lot of it is, well, dry. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 19:32, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
  • Equally there should be more about Geith and her, and their disagreement over how best to disable the Eye. Far too brief at the moment.
  • More info about why Luke took her to those places, ie bc Kenobi's spirit had been on Hoth etc.
  • Info about fighting the Darksaber.
  • Later experiments revealed Callista could still touch the dark side. More please.
  • More info about the fight on Yavin and fighting on the ground.
    • Addressed. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 20:22, 29 June 2007 (UTC)
      • I wonder if there could be more here. --Eyrezer 01:43, 1 July 2007 (UTC)
        • Added a little more, but she really doesn't do a whole lot except board the Knight Hammer. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 13:42, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
  • "revealed her survival to Luke" How?
  • Basically I think it could do with more expansion right throughout. --Eyrezer 01:31, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
    • Second that. The level of detail is so low right now that the Murder in Slushtime section is the longest part in relation to the rest. There doesn't seem to be any context to her actions or the people around her given throughout the entire entry. Cull Tremayne 06:24, 18 June 2007 (UTC)
  • Apparently her mom has been named. I'd like to see her get a mention. --Eyrezer 04:53, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
    • Gah! I'm getting a headache. --Eyrezer 03:38, 6 July 2007 (UTC)

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Comments

  • The next one in my "famous women of SW" FA series. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 22:00, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
  • I had to adjust the usage of the term "dreadnaught" and excise an errant BtS note, but aside from that it looks nice. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 17:55, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
  • I'd like to see the last red link cleared up. (Preference only as not required by FA rules) --Eyrezer 13:46, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
  • There is a mention of cows in the article. Is there any detail as to what type of creature these were? And if, it should probably be linked. I tried to look at the Wookiee. Tsaelke? Wander-kelp?
  • Is it stated that Djinn Altis allowed the relationship? Could they have done it themselves anyway? --Eyrezer 01:18, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
    • The exact quote from Children of the Jedi is not specific at all and merely says cows. It is the only mention of cows in the book. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 13:43, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
      • Cool. That can't be helped. --Eyrezer 03:54, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
  • There is also a nice pic of Callista in Steve Sansweet's Encyclopedia that I haven't seen elsewhere if someone is able to scan it in. --Eyrezer 08:15, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
    • Jaymach scanned it in, and it is now in the infobox. --Eyrezer 07:49, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
  • "Esoteric" - Nice word but I'm not sure it quite fits in its context. ("She also helped him get all the esoteric members of the ship's brainwashed crew to landers to get them off the Dreadnaught.") --Eyrezer 03:53, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
    • Oops. I meant "eclectic", which is more context-appropriate. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 13:36, 26 June 2007 (UTC)