Wookieepedia:Inq/Atris

Atris

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Support

1. .... 00:03, 3 April 2007 (UTC)
2. Lord Hydronium 00:01, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
3. Cull Tremayne 11:13, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
4. Darth Culator ^{(Talk)(Kills)} 22:47, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
5. Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 01:37, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
6. Jaina Solo^(Talk) 23:33, 9 April 2007 (UTC)

Things to do

• Diction needs some work in the first body paragraph.
• Needs more detail on her KotOR II encounter with the Exile.
• An ingame screenshot or two would be appropriate once the prose is expanded. Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 06:12, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
• Just one last thing. A little bit of the Reunion section seems to focus a lot on Atris's thoughts rather than her actions. Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 20:53, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Addressed. -Solus ^{(Bird of Prey)} 21:14, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
• Ref #14 has no description. Ref #18 is a dead link. I couldn't find a replacement link. In fact, many of our links to lucasarts.com pages are now dead, after their redesign. —Xwing328^(Talk) 21:03, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Both refs have been fixed. -Solus ^{(Bird of Prey)} 15:55, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments

I've been working on this one a bit, but it's kind of an odd article... there's a lot of non-canon concept art of Atris, and a lot of cut material, so that her Bts looks bloated. So I'm looking for suggestions, plus general feedback. Thanks :) Sarendipity ^Talk File:Atrissig.jpg 04:42, 25 March 2007 (UTC)

• I reworked the word choice in the first body paragraph, worked to better detail the Kotor II encounters with the Exile, and reworked a bit of the image placement (which includes in-game screenshots, uploaded by Sarendipity). Is it more satisfactory now? Or is there more to do? -Solus ^{(Bird of Prey)} 19:24, 25 March 2007 (UTC)