Wookieepedia:Inq/Adas (third review)

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Adas

Things to do

  • Adas
    • The infobox image crop kind of sucks. That image is being cropped from a larger picture, which I think would look a lot better.
    • Underlinking. Check for instances of linking to disambig pages.
    • Not sure the into really needs to be three paragraphs in length, which is pretty big relative to the rest of the Biography.
    • I'm not sure any of the BBY dates being gleaned from "Evil Never Dies" are explicitly mentioned as such in that article. Rather, I believe the article speaks in more general terms like "3,000 years before the Galactic Republic," which means these BBY dates needs to be translated and explained in a ref note. Likewise, the BBY date being sourced to "Korriban: Planet of Lost Souls" does not work as such, and that needs to be referenced by individual article, anyways.
    • I don't really understand why what is apparently the only other image of Adas is being relegated to the BTS. Certainly this is more relevant than the other two non-Adas images in the Biography.
    • The first subsection title is pretty bland. Something more exciting than just "King" would be nice.
    • The first and second "Legacy" paragraphs, the P/T paragraph, and the BTS paragraph all look like strong candidates for paragraph breaks
    • Could use an Equipment section
    • BTS unsourced.

Removal of FA status

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