Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Unidentified Dark Jedi (Endar Spire)

Requested By: Lewisr ( talk )
Date Requested: 04:48, 11 October 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 15:38, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Unidentified Dark Jedi (Endar Spire)

Death field should include the date and location in a single date note per modern precedent.
Needs a pronouns/gender update.
None isn't a hair color so I think that should be taken out of the infobox (possibly even removing from the PT as well).
Body and infobox should use the same color for the skin color, so it should pick one and stick with it.
Some of the powers/abilities section should be moved to an equipment section (along with adding anything else of note).
Unsourced BTS, that also needs to remove the redundant mention of being mentioned in the strategy guide. Lewisr (talk) 04:48, 11 October 2024 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 07:32, 11 November 2024 (UTC)