Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Sora Mobari

Requested By: Lewisr ( talk )
Date Requested: 00:30, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 08:45, 5 September 2024 (UTC)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Sora Mobari

The death field should follow the precedent of including date and location in a written note if not cited directly to a source.
Needs a gender/pronouns update.
I noticed that Evan-Ott stated this event was in 22 BBY, while this 21 BBY, so the date should be investigated and corrected if necessary.
Not seeing the need for the double references in the Padawan field.
Carrying over from Wookieepedia:EC/Evan-Ott, The attack against Ithorian terrorists probably needs to have its own article.
A'Sharad Hett being a Jedi Knight should be included in the body.
BTS needs to be cleaned up to redundant information and to also be cited for the remaining comic issue info.
Category:Individuals with lost eyes looks to be applicable. Lewisr (talk) 00:30, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
This battle where a Padawan betrayed their own master, we have a concrete date, a concrete place, and both sides known (Jedi and Ithorian terrorists) seems notable enough for a page. In fact, "attack against Ithorian terrorists" would be a non-conjecture name Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:54, 5 July 2024 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:03, 5 August 2024 (UTC)