Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Marl

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Marl

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 04:31, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 06:28, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • The way the body's phrased, seems like Marl's just operating on Taris and it isn't necessarily homeworld. If it is his homeworld, that should be explicitly stated, but otherwise, should be out of the infobox.
  • Pronouns/gender update.
  • A bit of the PT can be trimmed out into a skills section.
  • Clothing can be documented as equipment, as well as some of the weapons and other things.
  • BtS cleanup: needs cites, 2nd sentence not needed per modernization.—spookywillowwtalk 04:31, 20 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 02:41, 20 April 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Good status

Vote to strip Good status

  1. ACvote Two months unaddressed —spookywillowwtalk 00:48, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 00:52, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 06:28, 20 May 2024 (UTC)