Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Lynia Delline

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Lynia Delline

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 20:01, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 16:31, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

  • Biography sectioning
  • Equipment to be sectioned.
  • 'Attractive woman'—should say who found her attractive, rather than a flat descriptor, as it otherwise comes across as objectifying.
  • Last two BtS sentences necessary?
  • Pronoun/family fields.
  • Once bio is sectioned, another image would fit.
  • Her brother can have an article stubbed to link.—spookywillowwtalk 20:01, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Updated everything and no equipment. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:30, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to retain Good status

  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 15:22, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 15:23, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 16:30, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

Vote to strip Good status