Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Llokay

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  • 1 Llokay
    • 1.1 Object
    • 1.2 Comments
    • 1.3 Vote to retain Good status
    • 1.4 Vote to strip Good status

Llokay

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 15:17, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 07:37, 22 July 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • The BBY date needs a note as I don't believe the books use BBY/ABY dating.
  • Needs a pronouns/gender update.
  • I think the intro could use splitting.
  • Body could use a relevant image.
  • Anything that can go in equipment/powers sections?
  • BTS needs to be cleared up to remove redundant information, also needs sourcing. Lewisr (talk) 15:17, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Yevra was in need of an update from CSWE, would be worth checking if the same update was needed for Llokay Lewisr (talk) 15:23, 22 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:06, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Good status

Vote to strip Good status

  1. ACvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 00:21, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:24, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 07:36, 22 July 2024 (UTC)