Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Knuckles (182nd Legion)

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  • 1 Knuckles (182nd Legion)
    • 1.1 Object
    • 1.2 Comments
    • 1.3 Vote to retain Good status
    • 1.4 Vote to strip Good status

Knuckles (182nd Legion)

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 00:22, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 07:17, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • The death should include the location and date in a single date note as per modern precedent.
  • Looking at the issue page, it says the story takes place in 22 BBY while this differs, would like to see the date investigated to be sure which is accurate.
  • Needs a pronouns update.
  • Per the layout guide 'The "Affiliations" field of infoboxes shall list sub-bullets to a maximum depth of one.'
  • Don't see the need to mention about Jango's eye color, just mentioning Knuckles is fine.
  • Anything that can be noted in a skills/abilities section?
  • Needs an equipment section.
  • BTS needs to include a full release date and publisher. Lewisr (talk) 00:22, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:06, 16 October 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Good status

Vote to strip Good status

  1. ACvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 01:01, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:02, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 07:16, 16 November 2024 (UTC)