Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Kaul (Twi'lek)

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Kaul (Twi'lek)

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 03:17, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 06:52, 24 May 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Pronouns/gender update.
  • The way the body's written says he just lives on Nar Shaddaa. I'd like to see if that's actually his homeworld or if it's just assumed because he operated there. Either way, to be made consistent between the body and infobox.
  • A little bit of the PT section is definitely more skills section oriented.
  • Stuff like the eye and skin color etc. physical descriptors belongs in PT not in Biography.
  • Clothing to be documented as equipment.
  • That part in the BtS that links to canon will need a little trim per modernization standards.—spookywillowwtalk 03:17, 24 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:05, 24 April 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Good status

Vote to strip Good status

  1. ACvote Two months unaddressed —spookywillowwtalk 03:11, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 03:14, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 06:51, 24 May 2024 (UTC)