Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Hylon

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Hylon

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 01:20, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 08:04, 29 July 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Needs a pronouns/gender update.
  • The disabled used in the intro needs to be changed to a synonym of the word.
  • The 19 BBY date isn't citable to Revenge of the Sith so needs another source.
  • The caption for the PT should be made a bit more relevant to the section or can another relevant image be used instead?
  • Some of the PT information should be in an equipment section instead.
  • The BTS needs to be sourced and remove some redundant information. Lewisr (talk) 01:20, 27 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:30, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

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  1. ACvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 03:48, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 04:45, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 08:04, 29 July 2024 (UTC)