Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Ernek Marskan

Requested By: — spookywilloww talk
Date Requested: 19:25, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
Date Archived: 18:57, 29 October 2023 (UTC)

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Ernek Marskan

Biography sectioning.
Pronouns/family fields.
BtS quote from that Tumblr post could be added.
Am thinking there's space for at least one more image of a relevant subject.
Would like to see that by 1 BBY work its way into the intro, and perhaps add a sentence or two to the intro to beef it out.
Equipment to be sectioned; possibly skills (if applicable) for piloting skills, depending on if there's enough.—spookywilloww^talk 19:25, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
- All fixed. From checking the source material, didn't see anything on equipment or skills. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:26, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
  - In P+T I was eyeing 'Marskan was a competent pilot who, despite at least one reckless performance, was generally considered reliable in combat.'—would this not be more suited to skills, rather than personality?—spookywilloww^talk 18:29, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
    - Moved to a section, and that's indeed true. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:36, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
Casal Marskan should get some more proper context in the bio. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:13, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
- Well I added that he was a Rebel pilot. Note this is already said later in the biography itself. Nothing established about Casal outside of both the Marskans' service. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:56, 16 September 2023 (UTC)