- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article that failed review. Please do not modify it.
Denal-zon
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 00:33, 29 March 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 12:19, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Pronouns/gender update.
- I'd like someone to check whether his homeworld is definitively Coruscant; on a lot of noms we've had passing through the review system recently, it was incorrectly assumed or conflated due to an individual operating on a planet. However, does not necessarily mean it's their homeworld.
- First two sentences is all referenced to the date ref, which doesn't seem right.
- I think that if the top Biography paragraph is cleanly split, there'll be space for an IU-subject-relevant-image.
- Clothing to be documented as equipment.
- BtS: Is there a specific reason the BtS quote is there? If it's just an extra IU quote and not an alt storyline, not needed.
- BtS: Sourcing needed. Note to have the VA specifically checked as that very likely can't be referenced to the mission alone like most of it.
- BtS: Full date isn't needed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:33, 29 March 2024 (UTC)
Comments
- Mark article as on probation at one month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 02:17, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
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Two months unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:03, 29 May 2024 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 00:07, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 12:19, 29 May 2024 (UTC)