Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Casal Marskan

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  • 1 Casal Marskan
    • 1.1 Object
    • 1.2 Comments
    • 1.3 Vote to retain Good status
    • 1.4 Vote to strip Good status

Casal Marskan

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 19:32, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 00:20, 24 November 2023 (UTC)

Object

  • Biography sectioning.
  • Pronouns/family fields.
  • Am thinking there's space for at least one more image of a relevant subject, and enlargement of the one there.
  • Death reference can be merged to one cite, per modern precedent.
  • Last sentence of the BtS necessary?
  • BtS should also be reworked to match up with the 1st and 1stID tags.—spookywillowwtalk 19:32, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
    • All fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:15, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
  • The fact Caaal died in 0 BBY is only mentioned in the intro and infobox, the body should include it also. Lewisr (talk) 15:25, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:32, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to retain Good status

  1. ACvote Sorry about getting to this a bit belatedly. Good work.—spookywillowwtalk 17:25, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 20:27, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 00:20, 24 November 2023 (UTC)

Vote to strip Good status