Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Boyle Marcom

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Boyle Marcom

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 03:00, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 08:04, 29 July 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • "He owned a lightsaber, which could imply he was also a force-sensitive." reads pretty speculatively phrased for an article in the modern era.
  • Pronouns/gender update.
  • An image can be slipped into the Biography.
  • Equipment to be sectioned out (if anything additional I'm unsure, but the saber at minimum).
  • Per the first bullet point, probably needs a decent copy-edit for modern wording for flow/clarity/WP:NPOV.—spookywillowwtalk 03:00, 29 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:04, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

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  1. ACvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 03:49, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 04:46, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 08:04, 29 July 2024 (UTC)