- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article that failed review. Please do not modify it.
Atar
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 03:38, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 08:49, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Pronouns/family fields/gender update + first-usage pronoun refs if needed.
- ABY date needs a note, probably to The Essential Reader's Companion.
- Should note the planet where those events take place. Also, an image of the Jedi Temple or one of the people linked would suit.
- Middle pararaph is a bit chunky. I imagine top three biography paragraphs could be shifted around to form four paragraphs, leaving two in a top section and two in the bottom, with another quote (and possibly image) added to suit.
- Would like to see equipment/skills documented as necessary.
- BtS to be cited and cleaned up.
- Could use a bit of an overall copy-edit, including that the formatting for audiobooks nowadays is to link the audiobook within {{1st}} rather than leave it plaintext.—spookywillowwtalk 03:38, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
Comments
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 01:19, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
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Two months unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 04:26, 17 March 2024 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 04:42, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 08:48, 17 March 2024 (UTC)