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Zornak's companion
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:13, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Back to Marvel's Ewoks
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:EWOKS, WP:COMICS
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Support
- LucaRoR
(Talk) 07:29, 25 January 2022 (UTC) 
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 10:43, 28 January 2022 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 15:52, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 23:33, 17 February 2022 (UTC)- OOM 224 16:03, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
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UberSoldat
Lots of "he"s and "him"s in the last Biography paragraph that don't make it clear who the article is talking about.UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:43, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
- That should do the trick. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:05, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
- Still some confusion: "After Zornak gave his companion's blaster to Warrick and ordered him to stun and capture him," "The runaway Ewok was able to break Warrick free of the stone, however, allowing Teebo to devise a plan that resulted in him using a stone of obedience against Zornak.," "Once the alien was under his control, he had him issue an order to the rest of the crew to free all of the Ewoks and leave the moon of Endor." UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:15, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- Should be done now. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:57, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- Still some confusion: "After Zornak gave his companion's blaster to Warrick and ordered him to stun and capture him," "The runaway Ewok was able to break Warrick free of the stone, however, allowing Teebo to devise a plan that resulted in him using a stone of obedience against Zornak.," "Once the alien was under his control, he had him issue an order to the rest of the crew to free all of the Ewoks and leave the moon of Endor." UberSoldat93
- That should do the trick. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:05, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
Luca
It isn't clear what the stones of obedience are.- Contextualized the same way I did for Brador.
I'd like to see a touch of context for the transport chamber.- That's pretty much self-contextualizing to be frank--it's a chamber that transports you somewhere, simple as that.
- The fact that it is a "teleportation device" sounds important to me, and the reader might not think that there was a chamber that allowed you to teleport to another place. LucaRoR (Talk) 18:02, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- A reader might not think that there was a Force that connected all living things, but we don't provide extra context on that, do we? This is quite a straightforward device: a transport chamber is a chamber that transports people. I've given a mention to teleportation in the body, but anything further than that doesn't seem necessary to me.
- The fact that it is a "teleportation device" sounds important to me, and the reader might not think that there was a chamber that allowed you to teleport to another place. LucaRoR
- That's pretty much self-contextualizing to be frank--it's a chamber that transports you somewhere, simple as that.
In the P&T quote, it isn't clear to whom he is referring.- Added.
- I don't see any changes. LucaRoR (Talk) 18:02, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- Oops. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:57, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- I don't see any changes. LucaRoR
- Added.
"Zornak's companion was excited at the prospect of having lots of precious gems." it sounds a bit out of nowhere: Could you provide a bit of context for this sentence?LucaRoR (Talk) 08:34, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- I don't see how that's out of nowhere. The article discusses the whole precious gem situation in the bio, and then the P+T mentions that he got excited about it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:54, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:03, 19 February 2022 (UTC)