Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Zornak

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Zornak

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:51, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: If only his species had gotten an offhand mention, Wallace could have created another Moddell planet...
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:EWOKS, WP:COMICS

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Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:47, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:09, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
3. Samonic (Talk) 14:49, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
4. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:05, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:24, 17 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• "with his crew and enslaved the native Ewoks to procure precious gems for him and his crew" Think this should be reworded so it doesn't say "his crew" twice in the same sentence.
• I think the infobox image should be exclusively of Zornak Fan26 (Talk) 03:13, 21 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Handled both. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:38, 21 January 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• Is the typo in the quote from the comic?
  • Me, thanks.
• Captain is intro exclusive Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:50, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:49, 8 March 2022 (UTC)

Lucornak

• "Under the guise of simply being a traveler, he was able to convince the Ewoks to all wear the stones of obedience." I don't think this is a P&T. Maybe more an ability?
  • Done.
• Minor thing, but the {{Film}} template should be used in references also if they are "written," in my understanding. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:11, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Not required. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 14:42, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Resolved via Discord. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:05, 15 March 2022 (UTC)

Spooky

• "Captain Zornak was an alien who came to the Forest Moon of Endor in a starship with his crew and enslaved the native Ewoks to procure precious gems for them." This sentence reads almost like he was trying to procure the gems for the Ewoks. I'm not sure if there's a way to slightly tweak it so that it's clear "them" is Zornak, who intended to take the gems for themselves (and their crew I guess).—spookywilloww^talk 17:54, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 14:42, 15 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:24, 17 March 2022 (UTC)