Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Zittaasabba/Legends

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Zittaasabba

  • Nominated by: Menkooroo 15:51, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: One more Wookiee.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:13, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Kilson(Let's have a chat) 21:21, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Good--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 22:19, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 22:33, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
  5. One more support! ~SavageBOB sig 06:33, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 06:39, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Kilson
  • It's hard for me to tell from the picture on the site, but can you tell the color of Zittaasabba's eyes? If so, please insert this into the Infobox and P&t.
    • I think it's too small a picture to be able to say anything for sure. It looks like they could be anything from dark blue to light grey. However, looking at his picture for that long made me realize that his hair was more than just brown, and that his hairstyle was probably worth a mention. Check out these changes! Menkooroo 03:39, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
      • Good work, didn't notice that.
  • In the Intro, you state Chewie acted as the craft's copilot. However, in the Bio, you say, "acting as a gunner. Father and son warriors Attichitcuk and Chewbacca were in the catamaran's portside pod, co-piloting and throwing thermal detonators, respectively." The way you phrase the sentence, you make it sound as if Chewie was the grenadier and Attichitcuk was the copilot. Which is it?
    • Nice catch. Chewie's the co-pilot; I screwed up in the bio description. Remedied.
  • That's all I have, nice job Menk. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 02:59, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
    • Thank you! Menkooroo 03:39, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
Savaged
  • Could this sentence be tightened up? It essentially says twice that he piloted a catamaran: "Zittaasabba piloted an Oevvaor jet catamaran during the battle and flew the aerial vehicle through the lines of Confederate assault tanks." That's it! ~SavageBOB sig 00:01, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
    • Tightened! Menkooroo 05:27, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:51, May 27, 2011 (UTC)