Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Zett Jukassa

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Zett Jukassa

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 19:19, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I planned on this nom being Shollan, but he got ShoLong that he'll have to be an FAN.

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Support

  1. D MCCG D MCCG (chat) 16:52, 7 May 2021 (UTC)
  2. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:24, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Objections handled via Discord. MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 08:06, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Nice work. Sorry for such the delay! Zed42 (talk) 09:25, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 11:05, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • I don't think the bit about Organa's nightmares is neccesary intro material.
  • Grand Army of the Republic is double-linked in the body.
  • "Though a young Jedi at the time of Order 66, Zett Jukassa heroically fought back against the clone troopers who invaded the Jedi Temple." Does any source use the word "heroically" or a symonym? Fan26 (Talk) 02:23, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Coruscant is currently not mentioned in the body.
  • ID Raada as being in the Outer Rim Fan26 (Talk) 01:07, 10 April 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Images can be enlarged.
  • Bail's reaction to his death can be included as a quote in the body.
  • Can anything from Ahsoka be used as a quote as well?
    • Nope.
  • BTS can use an image of Jett.
  • This source should be investigated for filming information. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:00, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Can you specify what source(s) in Legends provide the character's names in the BTS? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:05, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
Zed
  • The intro and body contain conflicting accounts of who Jukassa was killed by.
    • Slaps face. Done.
  • The way that the intro is worded makes it appear as if the Jedi Archives and Jedi Temple were different places. The context for the Temple and Coruscant should be moved to the first mention of Jukassa's location.
    • Done.
  • I'm not sure that you can source "Born in the waning years of the Galactic Republic" to the Databank entry.
    • Removed.
      • Despite this, I do think it would still be worth mentioning the general timeframe during which he was a Jedi ("the time of the Galactic Republic" or something) rather than just "at some point". Zed42 (talk) 11:12, 18 April 2021 (UTC)
        • Added.
  • The body doesn't include a mention of the fact that his AOTC appearance took place in the Archives at all, and first mentions the Temple when Jukassa is fleeing from it without establishing what or where it is.
    • Whoops, fixed.
  • The Organa information in the final sentence of "Life as a Jedi" should probably be split into a new sentence; that way, you can provide a little more context for why Organa was there.
    • Split.
  • The Equipment section can elaborate on the color of his lightsaber and robes.
    • Added.
  • "Around twenty takes of the scene were shot." Which scene does this refer to? If it's a different scene from the Kenobi encounter previously mentioned, that should be specified. Zed42 (talk) 02:57, 10 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Indeed referring to the Kenobi scene. Geez, I don't know how Ayre does film noms so easily. :P Thanks for the review! JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 06:47, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
  • The intro should mention something about the temple specifically coming under attack during 66, to give more context to why he was fleeing it.
    • Added.
  • Can "Core Worlds" as context for Coruscant be sourced to AOTC? Zed42 (talk) 11:12, 18 April 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • The article about the kids roles says that GL told Jet to get angry in his performance, which I think is worth noting in the Bts as it has character implications.
    • Added.
  • The parts about Zett being in the library in 22 BBY should be a little more specific about the timeframe so it doesn't read like he was just hanging in the temple for that entire year. Something like "shortly before the Clone Wars"
    • Fixed.
  • I don't believe braids being a symbol of the Padawan rank can be sourced to ROTS. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:41, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
Ecks
  • "Three years later, in 19 BBY, Order 66 was declared by the Sith Lord Darth Sidious, which caused the clone troopers of the Grand Army of the Republic to turn on all of the Jedi. As Jukassa attempted to flee the Temple, which had come under attack, he came across several troopers." I think this could be worded better. The attack could be mentioned in the first sentence here. Something like "...in 19 BBY, after Order 66 ..., clone troopers of the GAR attacked the Jedi Temple. As Jukassa..." Right now you're both saying that they turned on the Jedi AND that they attacked the temple, which is kind of redundant phrasing in an intro paragraph. 1358 (Talk) 10:17, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
  • "...labeling the entire Jedi Order as traitors to the state. As such, Jukassa and his Jedi brethren were declared enemies of the Republic" Redundant phrasing; you don't need to say thay were declared traitors/enemies twice. 1358 (Talk) 17:24, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:05, 15 June 2021 (UTC)