Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Zeer (criminal)

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Zeer (criminal)

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 03:50, August 20, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The criminal. Not the zebra-giraffy thingy.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:34, September 12, 2012 (UTC)
2. Winterz (talk) 12:12, October 6, 2012 (UTC)
3. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:02, October 8, 2012 (UTC)
4. Fixed a punctuation and linking error. Good job. I kinda laughed at this scene when Kira faked the mind trick. :P MasterFred^(Whatever) 04:21, October 16, 2012 (UTC)
5. First Cade article I've read. Nice work. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:23, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Winterz

• Remember to always capitalize the 'H' on Human. (P&T section)
  • Done.
• Don't know if it's just me but in "Zeer was hired by the Sith Lord Tarnis to stage the kidnapping of his fake identity Doctor "Eli Tarnis" from the Senate Building, and Zeer's men served as distractions in the spaceport while the Sith fled.", the connector seems misplaced. I'd recomend you to change the sentence somehow, maybe even dividing it, as it is very confusing right now. Winterz (talk) 13:55, August 20, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 20:26, September 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cav

• Article for Tarnis' staged kidnapping? - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:50, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
  • Well, it's in the Trash Compactor right now, but done. Cade Calrayn 20:26, September 7, 2012 (UTC)
    • Ugh. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:34, September 12, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:23, October 21, 2012 (UTC)