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Yerbana
- Nominated by: Master
Fredcerique 05:37, May 14, 2020 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Got several WP:TCW and WP:AST crossovers planned.
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Support
- ComicalNinja [Talk] 21:34, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- RattsT (talk) 07:50, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
Objections handled via IRC. 
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:16, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 07:35, June 21, 2020 (UTC)- Tommy-Macaroni 22:24, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
Object
UberSoldat
The name of the battle can be added and sourced to the OST, Star Wars: The Clone Wars - The Final Season (Episodes 9-12).The date note will need more work. This battle takes place before Coruscant.UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:54, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
- Both addressed. Nice catch on the OST. MasterFredcerique 07:02, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
In order to firmly place the battle in 19 BBY, you can say this takes place after Ahsoka's trial.UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:04, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
- How does the current ref note not firmly place the battle in 19 BBY? MasterFredcerique 07:53, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
Placing an event between two others with concrete dates is the precedent. Currently in the article, there is no guarantee that the battle of Coruscant doesn't mark the beginning of 19 BBY, and Yerbana the end of 20 BBY.UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:18, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
- It has been done. MasterFredcerique 18:20, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
- It has been done. Master
- How does the current ref note not firmly place the battle in 19 BBY? Master
- Both addressed. Nice catch on the OST. Master
Ratts
Any way to work in an Inhabitants section?RattsT (talk) 07:42, May 14, 2020 (UTC)- Not really. We have no information on them. MasterFredcerique 07:51, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
- We know that they were suffering under the Separatists. I think you can say a little more about them, if not in a section than perhaps in History. Right now the only acknowledgement of them is in Anakin's quote. RattsT (talk) 08:11, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
- I've made a quick mention in the history section. MasterFredcerique 18:20, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
- I've made a quick mention in the history section. Master
- We know that they were suffering under the Separatists. I think you can say a little more about them, if not in a section than perhaps in History. Right now the only acknowledgement of them is in Anakin's quote. RattsT (talk) 08:11, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
- Not really. We have no information on them. Master
Spooky
I think it might be nice to work the date note into {{TCWcanondates}}, and template call to that, for future consistency of dating that episode.The image caption "The 212th Attack Battalion struggles to make ground." reads slightly off to me - perhaps "gain ground" is a better term for what they were attempting?- Wording changed.
If the page is going to sit in Category:Rocky planets, it would be nice to specify that the terrain was rocky somewhere in the Description.- Added.
Reference 4 in the BtS goes to this page, not an archive of the video.—spookywillowwtalk 21:13, May 16, 2020 (UTC)- No idea how that happened. Fixed regardless. MasterFredcerique 22:19, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
- No idea how that happened. Fixed regardless. Master
I think that perhaps the last sentence of the intro could be split, seems like it's trying to put a lot of events in one statement. And, would also result in a slightly longer intro.Very minor, but would you mind perhaps tacking on a slight addition to the quote caption of the History section, perhaps "Skywalker arrives to assist Kenobi during the Battle of Yerbana"? Might help more firmly establish the quote's relevancy to the planet, given it's brief nature.BtS: "Concept art for Yerbana was done by Andre Kirk with lighting concept done by Molly Denmark." I think it might be missing a word or two to make it flow better, perhaps something like "...was done by Andre Kirk, while the planet's lighting concept was done by Molly Denmark." Perhaps, also, not have "done by" twice in the sentence, if there's a suitable substitute.—spookywillowwtalk 04:29, May 18, 2020 (UTC)- All three handled. MasterFredcerique 05:43, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
- All three handled. Master
Editor
Clone Captain should be linked instead of cloning and Captain.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:24, May 16, 2020 (UTC)- Fixed.
You should write Rex's designation number and then put his name in quotation marks after it.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:24, May 16, 2020 (UTC)- Done. MasterFredcerique 22:29, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
- Done. Master
The link to Rex should be on CT-7567. So make it [[Rex|CT-7567]]. Like this page.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:18, May 23, 2020 (UTC)- Done. MasterFredcerique 19:47, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
- Done. Master
Anil
Could you please add that the battle took place both on the ground and in the atmosphere of Yerbana?The narrator in the episode also says that Yerbana was a "distant" planet.As far as I can see, "Old Friends Not Forgotten" being the ninth episode in the season cannot be sourced to that SW.com article.About the addition of a soundtrack in the Sources list, I don't think any of the status articles as of today listed soundtracks that include a mention of the subject. I understand sourcing the name of the battle to it, but I don't think this means it should be listed under Sources. It doesn't even have any unique/new information about Yerbana itself, which would make more sense to add it to the list if it had, in my opinion. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 05:31, June 8, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:24, June 23, 2020 (UTC)