Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Yennir of the Green (second nomination)

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Yennir of the Green

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Support

  1. VergenceScatter (talk) 07:05, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
  2. Nice work! LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 18:08, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:23, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:33, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 23:02, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Verge
  • I think that the P&T section would work better as Skills and Abilities. What are your thoughts? VergenceScatter (talk) 18:04, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
    • That makes more sense, updated Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:04, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
Luca
  • In the intro, it sounds like the target was destroyed out of nowhere. What would you say about specifying that fighters destroyed it?
    • Reworded, better? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:11, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
  • I think that File:Malcom and Immel.png would fit well in the body.
    • It did indeed Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:11, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
  • You use the sentence "Yennir and the squad" many times: could you vary the language a bit? LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 15:58, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Better? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:11, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
CC-8
  • Is there a quote that can be used if the character's voice is all that appears? If not is there anything else from the story that can go in?
    • No, the story says that they check in and Malcolm hears their voices but not what they actually say. Moreover, each mention of Yennir of the Green is Malcolm's thoughts, which can't be used as a quote. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:42, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Shouldn't the article's title just be at "Yennir"? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:17, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
    • No, since we don't know if thats part of their name, a title, a place of origin, a species/race or something else Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:42, 18 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:02, 23 March 2022 (UTC)