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Yanjon Zelmar
- Nominated by: DwartiiDelver (talk) 03:12, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Sage #2. Basically Faya but reworded slightly.
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Support
- Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:05, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
- JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 16:01, 13 June 2021 (UTC) 
Slow down with the Dwartii. We don't want to see you go right after finishing the four of them :P OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 11:16, 4 July 2021 (UTC)- 1358 (Talk) 21:45, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:12, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
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There's a couple of instances where you give characters full names when only last names are necessary.Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:07, 7 June 2021 (UTC)- My main reasoning for that was simply due to their surnames not being given until some time after the sources in question (and even then, they've only been used outside of GE in that SW.com article), only to better represent how they were referred to in those earlier sources. If you still feel these should be changed, however, I can do so (and update Faya's page as needed as well). DwartiiDelver (talk) 04:30, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
- I can see that logic but I think it's better to be consistent with our encyclopedic style. As far as I know it's fine to change it without adding extra referencing, though I welcome any other input. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:19, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
- Removed a few first names. Look all right now, or were there other instances you were thinking of as well? DwartiiDelver (talk) 02:30, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
- Nope, got them all, I think having it written fully in the Bts is good. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:09, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
- Removed a few first names. Look all right now, or were there other instances you were thinking of as well? DwartiiDelver (talk) 02:30, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
- I can see that logic but I think it's better to be consistent with our encyclopedic style. As far as I know it's fine to change it without adding extra referencing, though I welcome any other input. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:19, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
- My main reasoning for that was simply due to their surnames not being given until some time after the sources in question (and even then, they've only been used outside of GE in that SW.com article), only to better represent how they were referred to in those earlier sources. If you still feel these should be changed, however, I can do so (and update Faya's page as needed as well). DwartiiDelver (talk) 04:30, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
The 1stID template in apperances should use the full name.- Is that necessary? I know some status articles which had first/last names identified in a different source, such as Gilad Pellaeon and L'ulo L'ampar, only include the name that was confirmed in that source.
- I was unaware of those examples. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:05, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
- Is that necessary? I know some status articles which had first/last names identified in a different source, such as Gilad Pellaeon and L'ulo L'ampar, only include the name that was confirmed in that source.
I think Era of the Sith can be linked early on. i don't have the source for it but is the Republic's ousting from Corscuant notable enough for an article? Might depend on if it's phrased as a conflict or not.Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:09, 9 June 2021 (UTC)- Linked Era of the Sith over on Faya's page but forgot to do so here. The source only mentions a "devastating ouster," however to be pedantic it doesn't explicitly state that the Sith ousted the Republic from Coruscant. Currently, there is an article for the battle in which the Sith took over Coruscant, though to be pedantic again I'm not entirely certain we can say this was the same event where the Republic was driven from Coruscant. DwartiiDelver (talk) 22:26, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
- Sound reasoning, why can't authors consider us when they alude to these things? :P Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:05, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
- Linked Era of the Sith over on Faya's page but forgot to do so here. The source only mentions a "devastating ouster," however to be pedantic it doesn't explicitly state that the Sith ousted the Republic from Coruscant. Currently, there is an article for the battle in which the Sith took over Coruscant, though to be pedantic again I'm not entirely certain we can say this was the same event where the Republic was driven from Coruscant. DwartiiDelver (talk) 22:26, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
OOM
The last paragraph in the BTS could use a little bit more context; what were the Knights of Ren doing there?OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 14:00, 3 July 2021 (UTC)- Added. DwartiiDelver (talk) 16:43, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
Ecks
"In his guide book for the planet Batuu, Traveler's Guide to Batuu, historian Eloc Throno encouraged collectors to keep an eye out for a series of statuettes depicting Zelmar and the other Four Sages of Dwartii possessed by the Ithorian antiques dealer Dok-Ondar which was put up for sale at his shop, the Den of Antiquities, in 34 ABY." This sentence definitely needs to be split up, it's a run-on.1358 (Talk) 21:17, 4 July 2021 (UTC)- Any better now? Also, for the bts quote the "[Stevens, concept artist]" is included in the original quote from the book, formatted the same as the rest of the text (aside from the brackets of course). As such, should its presentation here be changed back to how it was before? DwartiiDelver (talk) 21:40, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Sources needs to reflect the misspelling of the name with {{ID}} next to the title hosting that error.UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:52, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
- Added. DwartiiDelver (talk) 12:22, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:12, 5 July 2021 (UTC)