- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Xagobah
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 15:15, 27 July 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The fifth Ringbreaker target to be nominated for status. Mardona III and Nakadia remain realistic targets but would end up as FANs ultimately, especially Nakadia.
- Date Archived: 18:37, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 520 words (73 introduction, 330 body, 117 behind the scenes)
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Support
Imperators II(Talk) 06:58, 2 August 2023 (UTC)- You forgot to mention Yoda's exile, but that's not notable I guess.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 11:19, 2 August 2023 (UTC) - Fan26 (Talk) 02:53, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 18:25, 4 August 2023 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 18:34, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
Object
Imp
"As the operation progressed, the conflict saw a dark turn in events." — er, do we know what this dark turn was about? And I believe the wording in that passage could be improved, since it's not immediately whether you're talking about the Xagobah campaign specifically or the Galactic Civil War in general there.Imperators II(Talk) 12:30, 28 July 2023 (UTC)- "General Ria summarized the dark turn of the Xagobah campaign but expressed confidence the operation was reaching its end." is the only info I got on it. Second point addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:08, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
- That descriptor seems a bit POV-ish to me, might there be a way to reword it? Imperators II(Talk) 07:15, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- How's that? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:51, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- That descriptor seems a bit POV-ish to me, might there be a way to reword it? Imperators II(Talk) 07:15, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- "General Ria summarized the dark turn of the Xagobah campaign but expressed confidence the operation was reaching its end." is the only info I got on it. Second point addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:08, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
Anil
Is "military" in "New Republic Military" capitalized in Victory's Price (or any source you can remember)? New Republic Defense Force does not capitalize it as an alternative name.- Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:08, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
If that's okay for you, I think it's worth mentioning in BTS that Xagobah was a planet in Legends. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:14, 29 July 2023 (UTC)
- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:01, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:34, 4 August 2023 (UTC)