Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/XS stock light freighter

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XS stock light freighter

• Nominated by: Cwedin^(talk) 06:48, August 27, 2017 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The next entry in my Galactic Defense nominations

(5 ACs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Added a citation that dates Bounty Hunt to 0 BBY, but otherwise awesome work! - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 06:58, August 27, 2017 (UTC)
2. Cevan (talk) 17:39, August 27, 2017 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:45, August 28, 2017 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:14, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 19:02, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi (talk) 01:10, September 1, 2017 (UTC)
7. MasterFred^(Whatever) 01:19, September 1, 2017 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II

• Ref 1 needs to mention the Legends source that actually introduced the freighter's name. The referencing of the freighter's name in this current FAN is what I'm looking for.
  • Makes sense.
• What exactly do you mean by "cockpit extruding from a matching, saucer-shaped body"?
  • I was referring to the ship's yellow color scheme. Any suggestions on how to word that better?
    • I've changed it to what seems OK to me. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:45, August 28, 2017 (UTC)
• Is the lateral pair of laser cannons always on the port side of the ship? If so, it should be noted.
  • Seems so. Done.
• Could you please rearrange the BTS so that the reader is first introduced with the subject's first Canon appearance, followed by its Legends origins? Imperators II^(Talk) 22:54, August 27, 2017 (UTC)
  • Déjà vu. Hopefully I'll remember to do this next time. - Cwedin^(talk) 00:00, August 28, 2017 (UTC)

Toprawa

• Regarding reference 4, I presume you're intending to say that Bounty Hunt visually shows the XS to be smaller than the YT-1300, and you're using that TFA book to source the YT-1300's name. If that's what you're doing, I would recommend using a double reference note next to the YT-1300; otherwise, it looks like TFA book is giving some spec information that should be explained.
  • Yep, that's what I was going for. Done. - Cwedin^(talk) 01:34, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
• Noting that I aligned the body image right, which looks better in Oasis. Otherwise, it's dramatically indenting the BTS. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:23, August 31, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:21, September 1, 2017 (UTC)