Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Wrath

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Wrath (space station)

  • Nominated by: Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 19:23, November 20, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:57, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
  2. Zed42 (talk) 05:09, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ACvote The eagerly anticipated 2018 WP:AST/WP:AMB crossover event. Imperators II(Talk) 11:44, December 3, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:32, December 13, 2018 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:47, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Fan26
  • I think some context for how she lost her liver should be added. Fan26 (Talk) 03:25, November 21, 2018 (UTC)
  • Could an image of one of the scenes that contradict the book be added to the BTS to better illustrate them without making the BTS go into too much detail? Fan26 (Talk) 13:55, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
    • I'd say probably not, as I dislike BTS images and the BTS paragraph isn't that big, so an image would probably collide with a heading or be ridiculously small. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 19:27, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
      • Fair enough. Fan26 (Talk) 01:30, November 23, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • First thing I notice is that infobox image. A) It should be uploaded to a minimum width of 400px if possible (I notice someone actually added the low-quality template to it, which needs to be rectified). And B) It's not illegal to actually blacken out a graphic on an image rather than whiten it out, which would be ideal here. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:17, November 21, 2018 (UTC)
    • Okay so I've gotten a higher quality image thats a suitable size and blackened out. I've removed the quality tag as I think that's the best the image is gonna get outside of Japan, which I think is alright within GAN rule 14. However, I'll ask some Japanese users if they can access the original source of the image and if that is in a higher quality. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 09:34, November 21, 2018 (UTC)
Zed
  • "At that time, Imperial Commander Ciena Ree was given medical leave to regrow her liver, which was damaged at Endor, and was assigned to the Wrath for several months because of its capacity for extraneous personnel." I think it'd sound better if "which was damaged" was "which had been damaged". Also, maybe "its capacity" should be changed to "the station's capacity", to specify more clearly. Zed42 (talk) 10:11, November 21, 2018 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Could you add the artist of the webcomic? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:06, December 2, 2018 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Is Nash really a crewmember of the Wrath? It sounds like he's just there for the promotion. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:06, December 2, 2018 (UTC)
    • Good point. I removed him and Randd.
  • The terminology of a space station serving in the navy seems off since it's closer to a building then a space ship. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:06, December 2, 2018 (UTC)
Imp
  • "The crowd then proceeded to the Wrath's docking bay to board the Inflictor." — this implies that Imp-class SDs could dock with the Wrath. If true, this is worth mentioning in Description. Imperators II(Talk) 22:23, December 2, 2018 (UTC)
    • Done. Also added the bacta tank info to the description as you suggested on IRC. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 11:39, December 3, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:47, December 14, 2018 (UTC)