Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Whelm

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Whelm

• Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 05:31, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I've always found this ship interesting.
• Date Archived: 19:58, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 639 words (99 introduction, 383 body, 157 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:47, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 01:36, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 14:52, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 (he/him) 19:41, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:57, 10 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• Per precedent from Feyet Kiez, Imperators and I agreed that putting the Dark Empire as a sub-bullet under Galactic Empire in the infobox is how it should be done due to the Dark Empire's odd status as more of a faction within what's left of the Empire proper rather than one of the countless splinter warlord kingdoms
  • Makes sense, changed.
• Imperial Mutiny is always capitalised
  • Fixed
• Mention in the infobox it was destroyed above Alaskan
  • Added
• Give context for the Dark Empire in the intro please.
  • Fixed
• Give date for when Thrawn's campaigns were to establish timeframe for when Kiez and co. went rouge.
  • Added
• Missing links for Battle above Alsakan, Pre–Shadow Hand campaign, Warship/Legends. Fan26 (Talk) 05:50, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
  • All added, thanks VergenceScatter (talk) 19:36, 9 November 2023 (UTC)

Lew

• Precedent is to merge the date and location in the destroyed field into a note if it's not citable directly to a source Lewisr (talk) 21:38, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
  • How's that look?
    • Can you just note which source establishes that it was destroyed over Alsakan in the note please? 'during which the Whelm was destroyed over Alsakan according to [Source]' for example Lewisr (talk) 02:39, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
      • Added, sorry about the delay VergenceScatter (talk) 19:18, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
        • All good, thanks for doing it Lewisr (talk) 20:18, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
• I think it's worth including mention of where it was destroyed (over Alsakan) in the intro Lewisr (talk) 21:38, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Added
• Would like to see a date being added in the intro Lewisr (talk) 21:38, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Added
• Inconsistent referncing between the infobox and body in regards to it being the flagship/command ship of the Azure Hammer Command Lewisr (talk) 21:38, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Consistified (I know it's not a word :P)
    • It is now:P Lewisr (talk) 02:39, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
• Context for Byss please Lewisr (talk) 21:38, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Added VergenceScatter (talk) 02:13, 13 November 2023 (UTC)

OOM

• My copy-edit—I figured the first image should specify that it's depicting Anaxes, since it could be interpreted as showing the Azure Hammer Command. The one thing I suggest is to very briefly mention the two definitions of the verb "whelm." OOM 224 (he/him) 23:01, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Added, sorry about the delay VergenceScatter (talk) 04:03, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
    • No worries, welcome back OOM 224 (he/him) 19:41, 10 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• I tried to add an image in the description section but just couldn't get it to fit, so unforunately there's no image of what an SSD looks like. VergenceScatter (talk) 05:34, 7 November 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:58, 10 December 2023 (UTC)