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Water pistol
- Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:36, 25 September 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Word count exceeds Comprehensive Article max limit.
- Date Archived: 07:04, 8 November 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 560 words (110 introduction, 330 body, 120 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 481 words (93 introduction, 314 body, 74 behind the scenes)
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Support votes
Lewisr (talk) 06:01, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 16:40, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
CometSmudge (talk) 19:49, 3 November 2025 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 04:44, 8 November 2025 (UTC)
Objections
spookly
The Description's last two sentences both start with "They were..." which is a bit repetitive. I'd recommend sliding the last sentence's information into the first sentence of the Description: "Water pistols,{ref) also known as water blasters,(ref)" ... etc. which is a bit more standard for the presentation of alternate IDs at the start.Seems like the first History paragraph's events could have a "between year and year" range established based on the Vader/Luke stuff.There isn't really any precedent (or need) for an unrelated other-continuity BTS quote like is present. Unless there's proof that say, one of the authors was particularly referencing a specific scene from Legends as inspiration for a canon introduction, but having it just to have it isn't really done.The Greatest Apprentice Assistant's page seems to claim that it had a known writer, which to my knowledge is generally known for that magazine set. If verifiable, that author would generally be included.The two top EL listings should be removed; simply the template representing [it] is enough. Also backed up by the CT of not listing full reprints from YT of the same media (ie streams of every YJA episode, etc.) so long as the Wook template is present for it.—spookywillowwtalk 17:10, 10 October 2025 (UTC)
Lew
The use of disabling should be changed to a synonymLewisr (talk) 23:18, 18 October 2025 (UTC)- Not sure why given it is not a term that is traditionally or contemporarily perceived as harmful even among the disabled community (lest we would not refer to ourselves as such), and even less so contextually here, but nonetheless I will change it rather than argue the point here because this is not the time nor place for this discussion nor is it consequential to the subject matter of this particular article. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 02:16, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
The first paragraph in history is rather big, I think it can be splitLewisr (talk) 14:14, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:44, 8 November 2025 (UTC)