- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Wall of light
- Nominated by: —Tommy 9281 22:08, November 25, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: One of the few Jedi abilities capable of stifling my sorcerous powers.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 22:29, November 28, 2010 (UTC)- Nice job, one of my favorite powers.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:27, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Very nice. This Force power layout should be added to the LG by now. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:45, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Now why can't this be used outside of TOTJ? Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 00:11, December 3, 2010 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 14:34, December 3, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Jujiggum
Just one thing: I think it would be worth mentioning somewhere in the article proper that information about the wall of light was placed inside the Tedryn Holocron.- Addressed.
Not going to make an objection out of this, but thought I'd note: if you can, please rescan File:YavinDevastated.jpg to follow our image rules per WP:I cropping rule 2.Otherwise, excellent work Tommy. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 22:11, November 28, 2010 (UTC)- I don't currently have the means to correct the image, so I replaced it with an equally relevant one for now. When I am able to restore the original image, I will. Thanks for the review, Jonny. Please advise if anything further is required.—Tommy 9281 22:25, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
- Works for me. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 22:29, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
- I don't currently have the means to correct the image, so I replaced it with an equally relevant one for now. When I am able to restore the original image, I will. Thanks for the review, Jonny. Please advise if anything further is required.—Tommy 9281 22:25, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
Would it be appropriate to pipelink Force ghost here? "Although his spirit..."- Addressed.
Question: in reference note number 11, is there a specific reason why "Light" in Wall of Light is capitalized?- No, old stuff. Addressed.
The Sources list is in at least partially incorrect chronological order. Please revise.Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:24, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:34, December 3, 2010 (UTC)
Hmm, where do I begin? Thanks to the following for helping me with the sources: Xicer9, Green tentacle, Obi-wan Jacobi, Eyrezer, Dark Guardian, Dangerdan97, JMAS, Jaden Kenobi, and of course Master Jonathan for the copyedit. If I've forgotten anyone, my apologies; thank you too. I believe I've covered everything, but if not, please let me know so I can fix it asap.—Tommy 9281 22:08, November 25, 2010 (UTC)
- I'd prefer not to make a formal objection out of this point, since I know everyone's viewing specs are different based on screen size and resolution, but as a general rule images found within the main sections of articles should make every effort from spilling over into the BTS, which was my original rationale behind placing the lone article body image ahead of the quote in the "Users" section. It really wasn't too much of a problem the way it was before my change at its current size of 175px, but enlarging the image to 250px as you have recently done, Tommy, really only compounds this problem. Can we at least leave the image at its original size? Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:04, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Certainly. It didn't appear that way on my screen so I didn't realize it. It should be all set now.—Tommy 9281 03:44, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Good deal. I figured we were probably using very different screen resolutions. Thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:48, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Certainly. It didn't appear that way on my screen so I didn't realize it. It should be all set now.—Tommy 9281 03:44, December 2, 2010 (UTC)