Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Voleyy

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Voleyy

• Nominated by: ToRsO bOy (talk) 08:37, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Voleyy olé, olé, olé
• Date Archived: 20:13, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 318 words (70 introduction, 224 body, 24 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:57, 15 May 2023 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:12, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 20:28, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
4. Lewisr (talk) 21:33, 2 June 2023 (UTC)
5. Fan26 (Talk) 20:11, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

Object

Uber

• Please cut down the intro; it is currently similar in length to the Biography.
  • Reduced.ToRsO bOy (talk) 08:18, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
• Was the abridged audiobook checked? UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:39, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Yup. His part was omitted.ToRsO bOy (talk) 08:18, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
• Sounds like this detention center is notable enough for a page. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:50, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
  • AddedToRsO bOy (talk) 13:26, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

Fan

• "was not as worse" --> "was not as bad"
  • Changed ToRsO bOy (talk) 11:21, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
• The second sentence of the Bio's second paragraph is currently a bit of a run-on, please amend this Fan26 (Talk) 16:36, 4 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Amended ToRsO bOy (talk) 11:21, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:12, 8 June 2023 (UTC)