Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vess Kogo

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Vess Kogo

  • Nominated by: Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 19:18, April 27, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: One of the few minor non-Galaxies/non-Traviss Emperor's Hands out there.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 16:54, April 29, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 17:26, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 20:58, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Great work. Jonjedigrandmaster Jedi symbol (We seed the stars) 23:01, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Nice. JangFett (Talk) 19:22, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. IFYLOFD:
    • " After his mother was injured during a Rebel protest against Imperial taxes on the planet Hanofar, Kogo developed a burning hatred for the Rebellion," What do you mean by this? Why would he develop a hatred of the Rebellion? Was his mother an Imperial and was injured trying to suppress it? Clarify.
      • Added that she was a bystander, and clarified it slightly in the Bio. No other information on the incident is known.
    • "Kogo often carried out missions requiring little subtlety but a substantial amount of destruction" Such as...?
    • "one Rebel group conducted a protest that soon went out of control. " How so?
    • "This obsession never caused him to fail the Emperor in his assigned duties, but at one point he came close to doing so." When was this? Any information at all?
    • "Sometime shortly after the Battle of Yavin, Kogo came into conflict with a group of individuals affiliated with the Rebel Alliance." And? Did they try to recruit him?
    • "Palpatine never used Kogo for subtle missions," Why not?
    • That's all. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 21:47, April 27, 2010 (UTC)
      • To the rest of your objections, the source is not clear on any of those things. I've presented all of the information given by the source in most complete fashion possible, without stepping into speculation territory. Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 22:03, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:24, May 4, 2010 (UTC)