Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Verre Sydia

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Verre Sydia

  • Nominated by: Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 17:35, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I am exhausted and vaguely dehydrated from my bike ride so I may have missed something but here
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TOR

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. VergenceScatter (talk) 19:13, 13 October 2021 (UTC)
  2. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:45, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
  3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:40, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:54, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote OOM 224 22:15, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
Manoof
  • This sentence needs rephrasing "Without knowing, Sydia married an Imperial spy...", it is saying she didn't know she got married instead of not knowing the man was a spy; as well as indicating he was a spy before the marriage, which may not be correct? The second half has similar issues in that it may be better to phrase the hiring of the bounty hunter using the access. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:59, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
  • In P&T, is it fair to say that the degree of her loyalty was such that T7 doubted her being the spy? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:59, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • "locating the list for the Jedi Order" — what list? The article doesn't say OOM 224 22:53, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
    • It seems as though it's referring to the list of Imperial traitors, but the article should make things clearer. I read it as a list of Imperial traitors in the Republic that some former slaver attempted to get for the Jedi Order, which, with the limited context being given here, doesn't really make sense. OOM 224 23:04, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
      • That's exactly what happens, yes. Shafu's a former slaver but changes his ways and is killed while trying to retrieve the list of traitors. I've added "of traitors" but it's exactly what you read it as. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:38, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:15, 30 November 2021 (UTC)