Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Veemoss

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Veemoss

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:21, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I'm confident enough that we aren't going to see this guy in the finale that I think it's time to start the Andor noms.
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:13, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:03, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
3. Objection handled over Discord.—spookywilloww^talk 12:47, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 20:27, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Thrawn

• Good to see another andor nom! Hot should probably link to Temperature, and you need the director of the episode. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 17:35, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
  • I think hot in this sense is related to the electricity being active rather then the actual temperature of the floor. Is director for episodes a new precedent? I've certainly never included them on any of my previous noms and if we are going to start including crew for stuff like this I'd say the writer is more relevant to the character creation then the director. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:01, 18 November 2022 (UTC)

Braha

• Does 5 BBY need to be namedropped twice? I feel "that year" would do fine in the second instance. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:03, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
  • How does that look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:06, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Looks sound. Nice work. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:08, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
• You're linking to the wrong Level 5. As it stands, there's no article for the Level 5 at Narkina 5. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:06, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:02, 21 November 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• I listened to the Biography and P&T quotes and I can clearly tell there are more than two speakers, so Dialogue is needed there. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:11, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Listening again, I've split the P&T quote, but not sure where you're hearing the third person in the bio quote. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:35, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
    • With headphones, I can tell that "Aw, man," and "well we'll be smellin' him all night." are spoken by different people. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:39, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
      • To me it sounds like two people with the first just having overlapping background groaning or something interrupting part way through and the subtitles seem to support it being one prisoner, but since there's not really any way of knowing for sure I'm fine deffering to your judgement here. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:27, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
        • Reason I made the call is that the voices are coming from separate directions. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• Maybe there's a better phrasing for "lights out one night" since that is quite a niche English phrasing. Loqiical (talk) 00:19, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
  • By niche wording do you mean people might not be familiar with the phrase lights out? Either way I've reworded it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:36, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Yeah, though I think either works in the end. Loqiical (talk) 23:00, 27 November 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:46, 1 December 2022 (UTC)