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Vassek system

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~~Does Lair of Grievous specifically say the system got its name from the planet?~~

~~The second description sentence covers a bit too much, I'd put the part about Grievous's castle in a new sentence after it.~~

~~Mentioning Fisto's species is unnecessary.~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:09, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
- All done. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 12:42, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
~~I don't think Vassek 3 contained several other planets.~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:19, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
- That's embarrassing. Fixed. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 15:22, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
~~The history section could be a bit more explicit in saying that Grievous's castle was the site of the Republic mission.~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:42, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
- Makes sense. Amended. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 01:57, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
  - That wasn't quite what I meant, you'd already said that the Republic troops had entered the fortress. I was meaning that you should specify that the fortress was Grievous's in that section. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:13, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
    - Sorry, wasn't really clear, but is that what you're asking for? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 13:24, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

~~I think there should be some more context for the Gunray's escape than just escaped. Something like "Nute Gunray, who had escaped imprisonment from Republic forces." or whatever you think works.~~ Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:05, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
- How's that? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 12:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
"Fisto landed on the surface of Vassek 3, where he reunited with his former Padawan Nahdar Vebb and his squad of clone troopers," ok two things:
- ~~Yes Vebb is a former Padawan, but I think it'd be beneficial to add the fact he's a Jedi Knight now.~~
- ~~Who's squad is it, Fisto's or Vebb's? "his" leaves that part more ambiguous.~~ Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 20:56, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  - There. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 21:12, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

Please explicitly name those episodes in ref 3. References basically always need to be crystal-clear messages of "Fact A per source B, fact C per source D, etc." The only major exception to that is when you pipelink to one of those long-winded dating templates of ours. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:04, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed. I meant to get that a long time ago. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 21:48, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
Does "Rookies" feature an outside view of Vassek 3 or the Vassek system, or does it only depict the interior of Grievous's fortress? The AgriCorps members are in agreement that the depiction of an enclosed room with no view of the outside does not constitute an appearance of the moon/planet/system/etc, but only of that room/structure. This also affects the comic currently listed under Appearances. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:03, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed. But I don't own Age of Republic, so I can't determine that. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 14:04, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
  - It just depicts one of the statues in his castle, so I've removed it for you. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:33, 13 August 2021 (UTC)

Surely there are more applicable quotes. Fisto says something about being in the middle of nowhere at the beginning of the episode, and for the History you could pick pretty much any quote from the episode. 1358 ^(Talk) 09:36, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
- Added. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 14:54, 14 August 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:24, 14 August 2021 (UTC)