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Vassal One (Whetstone)

  • Nominated by: Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 18:44, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: More Kilji vassals! Proceed with caution: Kilji voices incoming.
  • Date Archived: 01:39, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 509 words (81 introduction, 403 body, 25 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS WP:NOVELS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 19:59, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:03, 5 May 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 01:55, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
  4. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:51, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
  5. Lewisr (talk) 00:45, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • Your second paragraph has several consecutive sentences that follow the pattern "independent clause, and independent clause." I'd suggest to try mixing in some different sentence styles. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:40, 19 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • I asked others if the intro was too short. They said it was okay. If it's not, though, let me know. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 18:44, 3 April 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:38, 20 May 2023 (UTC)