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Vangos Grek
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:32, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Per Shay's suggestion, perhaps the least fortunate member of Blue Squadron
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Support
- JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 03:17, 20 July 2021 (UTC) - Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:43, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
Thanks. UberSoldat93 
(talk) 11:02, 25 July 2021 (UTC)- VergenceScatter (talk) 15:03, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 07:54, 7 August 2021 (UTC)- OOM 224 09:54, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
Object
Macaroni
Missing FACPOV audiobook.- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:17, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
Is "a separate unnamed pilot featured in promotional imagery for the film" referring to Grek? The wording is a bit confusing.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:40, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
- No there's a different pilot with the helmet, is the wording now clearer? Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:17, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
Vergence
I don't really understand why "Grek urged his vehicle to hurry while trying to make it through the gate, but then screamed as he realized he was going to crash." is in the P&T section instead of biography.VergenceScatter (talk) 19:24, 28 July 2021 (UTC)- It is partially included in the body, but I feel like his emotional reactions to this stuff is relevant to his personality. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:35, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
I'm just not a fan of the first Bts sentence; the "but" clause stands out. You don't need to say he was shown prior to the film's release when the film release date and the trailer release date already say it. Maybe something like "Grek was created for R1, released on Dec 16, with the character being revealed in the second trailer on Oct 13" or something would flow better.1358 (Talk) 17:47, 5 August 2021 (UTC)- How's it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:10, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:54, 7 August 2021 (UTC)