Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Uphrades system/Legends

< Wookieepedia:Good article nominations
The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Uphrades system

  • Nominated by: Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 18:51, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Project Hero; probably one of the longer GANs on my current waiting list.

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 08:23, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 05:05, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Another clean nom from Cade. Nice work. Oh, and bribery ftw. :P MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 03:26, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
    • I will have my revenge. !crazylaugh Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 03:29, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:25, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Though I'm really starting to question these articles that have entire paragraphs dedicated to "this planet or system was located in a region that was generally explored or controlled by [Galactic Government] by [Year]." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:14, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Objection: I have no more objections. Winterz (talk) 01:20, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • Angral is mentioned in the last line of the intro but isn't anywhere before then.
    • Done.
  • When Angral is mentioned in the history it should state his connection with the Sith Empire.
    • Done.
  • If in the bit between the gamemechanic template the Hero can influence the decision to rescue the survivors it should probably be said there. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 10:25, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Context on the Jedi Restoration Concord.
    • Done.
  • In the intro, mention what superweapon devastated Uphrades.
    • Done.
  • You say that there were a few hundred survivors in the intro, and that statistic should be mentioned in the body.
    • Done.
  • Could the "Coruscant's Granary" nickname be mentioned and bolded in the intro? IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:52, March 8, 2013 (UTC)
    • It's a nickname for the planet. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 01:57, March 8, 2013 (UTC)
David Bowie
  • Infobox: no capitalization in brackets' situation.
    • Blarg upon the anons!
  • Is this system not mentioned in the Essential Atlas?
    • Seeing as the Atlas was released in 2009 and Uphrades was created for the 2011 game, no.
  • Noting that the last image has a large caption, it may be considered a sentence. I assume you'll know how to correct it. Winterz (talk) 01:18, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
    • There's no verb, so it's not a sentence. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 01:20, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:23, March 22, 2013 (UTC)