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Untitled Jabba the Hutt film
- Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:21, 10 October 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: See the CAN page for past objections
- Date Archived: 10:49, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 478 words (73 introduction, 405 body, 0 behind the scenes)
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Support
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:41, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
- Dentface (talk) 04:35, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
Provided the last objection below is addressed.—spookywillowwtalk 04:24, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 04:37, 24 October 2023 (UTC)- The amount of canceled Star Wars movies is genuinely a crime Panther436 (talk) 21:48, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
We love OOU noms Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:49, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
Object
Lew
Now we have confirmation of the film being about Jabba, the page can have an appearances sectionLewisr (talk) 19:24, 10 October 2023 (UTC)A credits section also too should be addedLewisr (talk) 03:49, 11 October 2023 (UTC)All 3 paragraphs in devlepment start with 'On [date],' can you find a way to vary the wording please?Lewisr (talk) 19:48, 12 October 2023 (UTC)The Rogue One and Solo dates should be added.Lewisr (talk) 17:31, 19 October 2023 (UTC)Since we have confirmation that it is a Jabba the Hutt film, it would be appropriate to move the page to 'Untitled Jabba the Hutt film'Lewisr (talk) 17:31, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
CC-8
This section of this wikipedia page could go in the external links sectionCommander Code-8 Hello There! 06:30, 11 October 2023 (UTC)Could add a bit of context about what The Godfather is.Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:23, 22 October 2023 (UTC)- Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:22, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
- Oh, I was actually just thinking of mentioning it as a series about an organized crime family. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:14, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
- I see. Added that, but I still kept the rest of the context I had added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:18, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
- There's now too much info to be included inside a set of dashes. I'd either break it up into multiple sentences or just keep the basic info about The Godfather being a series of films about a crime family. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:37, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
- I see. Added that, but I still kept the rest of the context I had added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:18, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
- Oh, I was actually just thinking of mentioning it as a series about an organized crime family. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:14, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
- Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:22, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
The body is now long enough for at least another sentence in the intro, maybe 2.Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:56, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:49, 9 November 2023 (UTC)